A Winter Hiku For Brian

thinking of Christmas we trudge through deep forest snow . . . pine needles trailing

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Joanna Daniel

Date: 8/16/2023 9:32:00 PM

Great, congratulations, Andrea:)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/16/2023 12:36:00 PM

On the scent…congratulations, Andrea!

Mulu Magdalinos

Date: 8/15/2023 3:33:00 PM

Hello Andrea,a lovely haiku! Have a great,blessed week!!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/15/2023 2:45:00 PM

Reads like a good contender to me for Brian's contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/15/2023 12:33:00 AM

A lovely image Andrea, I can feel the chill. Tom

The Situation

Date: 8/14/2023 6:23:00 PM

I no longer have those winters where I am.

Sotto Poet

Date: 8/14/2023 1:21:00 PM

Andrea, your haiku is truly exquisite, evoking a tranquil ambiance that exudes pure serenity. I extend my utmost well wishes for your success in the contest.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/14/2023 11:58:00 AM

What a cooling scene of pure serenity, Andrea! So visual - "trudging through deep forest snow." A breath cool air on a hot summer day. Blessings!