A Winter Hiku For Brian

thinking of Christmas
we trudge through deep forest snow . . .
pine needles trailing
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Daniel Avatar
August 16, 2023 at 9:32 PM
Great, congratulations, Andrea:)
Rodrigues Avatar
August 16, 2023 at 12:36 PM
On the scent…congratulations, Andrea!
Magdalinos Avatar
August 15, 2023 at 3:33 PM
Hello Andrea,a lovely haiku! Have a great,blessed week!!
Kendrick Avatar
August 15, 2023 at 2:45 PM
Reads like a good contender to me for Brian's contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
Cunningham Avatar
August 15, 2023 at 12:33 AM
A lovely image Andrea, I can feel the chill. Tom
Situation Avatar
August 14, 2023 at 6:23 PM
I no longer have those winters where I am.
Poet Avatar
August 14, 2023 at 1:21 PM
Andrea, your haiku is truly exquisite, evoking a tranquil ambiance that exudes pure serenity. I extend my utmost well wishes for your success in the contest.
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August 14, 2023 at 11:58 AM
What a cooling scene of pure serenity, Andrea! So visual - "trudging through deep forest snow." A breath cool air on a hot summer day. Blessings!
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