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A Wink of the Sun

The sun's flirtacious wink woke me at dawn I smiled, lazily stretched, and stifled a yawn I was teased by the touch of his warm hand The power of his refulgent torch, I understand His golden majesty then rose to brighten the skies greeting the morning in such a grandiose reprise

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/5/2020 10:02:00 AM

I enjoyed this cheery wake-up call, Jenna... And I always am happy to learn a new word ('refulgent'). Here's to a refulgent, sunny day! Smiles, Gershon

Jenna Logan
Date: 11/6/2020 4:12:00 AM

I'll toast the sun with you, GW. Thanks.

Mark Koplin

Date: 11/3/2020 3:32:00 AM

I wish the sun would wake me up instead of our puppies at 3 am to go out. Great poem Jenna!

Jenna Logan
Date: 11/3/2020 11:51:00 AM

lol Mark. Thanks!

Robert Lindley

Date: 10/31/2020 12:53:00 PM

An Inspirational and wonderfully woven tapestry of verse. Six verses painting most vividly the artist's creativity, color, heart, and insight of the sun and life as well. A fav-- a gem too....

Jenna Logan
Date: 11/3/2020 11:51:00 AM

Thank you, Robert.

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 10/29/2020 2:43:00 PM

Lovely wording Jenna, you bring out such sunshine thoughts to inspire us all!

Jenna Logan
Date: 11/3/2020 11:46:00 AM

Thanks so much, Gordon.

Silent One

Date: 10/28/2020 8:41:00 AM

Sounds lovely... Would be a sweet moment..

Jenna Logan
Date: 11/3/2020 11:45:00 AM

Thank you.

John Gondolf

Date: 10/28/2020 6:13:00 AM

Your tribute to the sun has brightened my morning. We haven't seen it in a while; it has been rainy and cold here for the last three days. Hope all is well in your world. Hugs.

Jenna Logan
Date: 11/3/2020 11:43:00 AM

Thanks, John.

Emilia James

Date: 10/28/2020 2:43:00 AM

A beautiful start to the day which brings good feelings within. Enjoyed your early morning verse, Thank you. Emilia : )

Jenna Logan
Date: 11/3/2020 11:40:00 AM

Thank you, Emilia.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 10/27/2020 2:33:00 PM

What a great way to be woken up, the sunlight coming through your window and feeling the warmth on your face. Tom.

Jenna Logan
Date: 10/28/2020 1:16:00 AM

Thanks, Tom.