Jenna Logan Poet Couplet

A Wink of the Sun

The sun's flirtacious wink woke me at dawn
I smiled, lazily stretched, and stifled a yawn

I was teased by the touch of his warm hand
The power of his refulgent torch, I understand

His golden majesty then rose to brighten the skies
greeting the morning in such a grandiose reprise

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Gershon Wolf November 5, 2020 at 10:02 AM I enjoyed this cheery wake-up call, Jenna... And I always am happy to learn a new word ('refulgent'). Here's to a refulgent, sunny day! Smiles, Gershon Jenna Logan November 6, 2020 at 4:12 AM I'll toast the sun with you, GW. Thanks.

Mark Koplin November 3, 2020 at 3:32 AM I wish the sun would wake me up instead of our puppies at 3 am to go out. Great poem Jenna! Jenna Logan November 3, 2020 at 11:51 AM lol Mark. Thanks!

Robert Lindley October 31, 2020 at 12:53 PM An Inspirational and wonderfully woven tapestry of verse. Six verses painting most vividly the artist's creativity, color, heart, and insight of the sun and life as well. A fav-- a gem too.... Jenna Logan November 3, 2020 at 11:51 AM Thank you, Robert.

Gordon Mcconnell October 29, 2020 at 2:43 PM Lovely wording Jenna, you bring out such sunshine thoughts to inspire us all! Jenna Logan November 3, 2020 at 11:46 AM Thanks so much, Gordon.

Silent One October 28, 2020 at 8:41 AM Sounds lovely... Would be a sweet moment.. Jenna Logan November 3, 2020 at 11:45 AM Thank you.

John Gondolf October 28, 2020 at 6:13 AM Your tribute to the sun has brightened my morning. We haven't seen it in a while; it has been rainy and cold here for the last three days. Hope all is well in your world. Hugs. Jenna Logan November 3, 2020 at 11:43 AM Thanks, John.

Emilia James October 28, 2020 at 2:43 AM A beautiful start to the day which brings good feelings within. Enjoyed your early morning verse, Thank you. Emilia : ) Jenna Logan November 3, 2020 at 11:40 AM Thank you, Emilia.

Tom Cunningham October 27, 2020 at 2:33 PM What a great way to be woken up, the sunlight coming through your window and feeling the warmth on your face. Tom. Jenna Logan October 28, 2020 at 1:16 AM Thanks, Tom.