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A Window From My House

A window from my house shows far of places, which makes me see trench and traces. As the morning sun falls, the voices of animals calls. The sky asks for the flight , which makes the morning more delight. The voices of the small players , bring the evening layers. The joy & fun fills in air, as everyone plays in pair. Now it comes the time of sunset, which makes me quite upset. The hill gets filled with snow, as the joy full wind blow. In the brightness of night, the snow flakes look bright. The road gets filled with snow , which makes the life quite slow. It makes old a toy , and feeling of playing in cold makes me enjoy.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/4/2015 7:58:00 PM
Sazal, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Sazal Malhotra
Date: 5/15/2015 9:57:00 AM
thank u
Date: 3/29/2015 10:51:00 AM
Sazal, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 3/29/2015 8:54:00 AM
- A small greeting and warm welcome, Sazal :) - Thank you for choosing to share your poems here at the P- Soup - Looking forward to read many poems from you in the future - // Anne-Lise :)
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