A wicked Twist Hansel And Gretel

The cupboards were bare.
The stepmother said,
“There’s not enough.
Leave them instead.”

Into the woods
with crusts of bread,
they were left to starve
or end up dead.

The world was cruel,
the fire cold.
But children learn
to grow up bold.

The witch was hunger
in disguise.
They saw the truth
behind her eyes.

They lit the fire.
They found a way.
Two kids came back—
but not the same.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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De Beaulieu Avatar
June 22, 2025 at 12:27 PM
Hello Jeanine, They came back, not the same! oh that is Eerie! Hugs. Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 8, 2025 at 9:59 AM
Hello Jeamine You are welcome. Hugs. /Darlene/
Dejesus Avatar
July 7, 2025 at 10:06 PM
Thank you
Greenhough Avatar
May 29, 2025 at 9:00 AM
Eerie but good alter Hansel and Gretel. They grow up fast.
Dejesus Avatar
June 5, 2025 at 5:54 PM
Thank you. Indeed they do.
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