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a white rabbit hops

a white rabbit hops across the snow covered ground… sees and smells the fox

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Date: 10/31/2011 4:01:00 PM
fear freezes his little brain....
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Date: 10/30/2011 9:58:00 AM
Excellent, Jack! Charles does want us to put our "season" word at the bottom of the poem. Catie said he also wanted our names and the date the poem was written, but I didn't see that on the long list of rules. Love the image and the way you used the senses of sight and smell. Best wishes in the contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/30/2011 5:30:00 AM
Very good haiku here wishes if for the contest.
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Date: 10/29/2011 9:04:00 PM
You have me smiling with this one. I sent you a Soup Mail with the links that might help you in your haiku journey. Best wishes. Thank you for your kind comment. Karen
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Date: 10/29/2011 7:58:00 PM
Now write one about the hungry red fox who smells a rabbit. Yum, yum.
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Date: 10/29/2011 4:24:00 PM
What a wonderful write! I just love the innocence of the hopping rabbit...meeting up with the not-so-sly fox! Great work Jack!!
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Date: 10/29/2011 1:26:00 PM
hope the poor little rabbit is not shivering as I am inside just looking at snow falling.. a sweet picture Jack luv..
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Date: 10/29/2011 1:10:00 PM
Jack,, a very nice haiku.... but , i hope the fox is stupid,,lol..... because that bunny can hop in the snow,, and the fox will never know the difference lol... you see they will both blend in,, enjoyed with a smile,..p.d.
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