Caryl Ramsdale Poet Crystalline

A White Curtain Falls

Time unwinds where river tears spill
O’er river rock, when angels stand still.

Caryl Ramsdale
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Crystalline Poetry Form

Caryl Ramsdale
September 3, 2011

“Crystalline Euphony“ contest by john freeman

1st Place
9/4/201

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Carol Sunshine Brown June 7, 2012 at 11:37 AM When I click on one of your poems I know it will be truly amazing Caryl. Thank you for sharing your words with us. I hope all is well with you and yours. I will stop back again soon. Love, Carol

Jack Horne September 24, 2011 at 3:29 PM Beautiful piece, Caryl. Love it

Helen The Poet September 14, 2011 at 7:39 PM It's amazing how*tearing up* in so little words you can describe that so dramatically Caryl Ramsdale September 16, 2011 at 1:04 PM Hi Helen...I have been practicing writing each line of every poem like it is the only...and I've been concentrating on writing short poetry forms. I think my writing skills are improving because I write this way. Thanks for the encouragement. CR

Caryl Ramsdale September 13, 2011 at 12:23 PM Dear fellow poet: Taking a time out while I organize my collection of poetry forms. Be back soon! CR

Carol Sunshine Brown September 12, 2011 at 10:34 AM I would like to take this time to thank you for your kind words on my poetry. I would also like to let you know I always enjoy reading your wonderful poetry Caryl. Love, Carol Caryl Ramsdale September 16, 2011 at 1:06 PM I enjoy reading your works Carol. I learn from reading. Thanks you for always leaving behind a kind comment when you read mine. CR

Andrea Dietrich September 8, 2011 at 11:33 PM such a well deserved win.Congratulations, CAryl. Caryl Ramsdale September 16, 2011 at 1:07 PM Thanks Andrea your remarks are always an encouragement. CR

Dr.Ram Mehta September 6, 2011 at 6:55 PM Contratulations on the first place win in the contest, Caryl Caryl Ramsdale September 16, 2011 at 1:08 PM Thank you Dr. Mehta I appreciate your comments. Have a peaceful day filled with blessings! CR

Carol Sunshine Brown September 6, 2011 at 10:00 AM Congratulations on your placement in John Moses Freeman's "Crystalline Euphony" contest Caryl. Love, Carol Caryl Ramsdale September 16, 2011 at 1:08 PM Thanks Carol! CR

Francine Roberts September 5, 2011 at 10:53 PM absolutely lovely, congrats on your well deserved first place win Caryl Ramsdale September 16, 2011 at 1:09 PM Thanks for reading and commenting Francine. Have a fun day at the Soup! CR

Olusegun Arowolo September 5, 2011 at 6:40 PM Nice piece,fine rhymes,deserved win.Congratulations Caryl... Caryl Ramsdale September 16, 2011 at 1:10 PM Thanks! Have another creative day filled with blessings my friend. CR

Jack Horne September 5, 2011 at 4:01 PM Many congrats on all your wins, Caryl : ) Caryl Ramsdale September 16, 2011 at 1:10 PM Hi Jack...thanks sir! CR

Carolyn Devonshire September 5, 2011 at 2:38 PM How lovely, Caryl. Congratulations on your first place in John's contest. Love, Carolyn Caryl Ramsdale September 16, 2011 at 1:11 PM Thank you very much Carolyn. Your comments are appreciated. CR

Sunflower Poetess September 5, 2011 at 9:38 AM Caryl, congratulations on your first place win with this magnificent write. Keep your wonderful poems flowing. Love, Glenna Caryl Ramsdale September 16, 2011 at 1:12 PM Thank you very much for the kind comment Glenna. Have a fun day at the Soup! CR

Kash Poet September 5, 2011 at 9:29 AM Congrats Caryl on your win..this is wonderful! Caryl Ramsdale September 16, 2011 at 1:13 PM I appreciate your remarks kash...Have a great day! CR

Sara Kendrick September 5, 2011 at 9:16 AM Congrats on your win..I knew that it would..Sara Caryl Ramsdale September 16, 2011 at 1:13 PM Thanks Sara! CR

Michael J. Falotico September 5, 2011 at 7:18 AM Well written piece, and many congrats on your frst place win.....Michael Caryl Ramsdale September 16, 2011 at 1:14 PM Michael: Thank you for the comments you leave behind. I appreciate your remarks! CR

Wilma Neels September 5, 2011 at 7:00 AM Hey there Caryl, so glad to see this one on top :) Congratulations on your win with this beauty :) Caryl Ramsdale September 16, 2011 at 1:15 PM Wilma: You are always encouraging others. Thanks for encouraging me. CR

Margaret Foster September 5, 2011 at 4:40 AM Well done Caryl with this lovely piece. I thought it would do well. many thanks . Marg Caryl Ramsdale September 16, 2011 at 1:16 PM Hi Margaret, Thank you! CR

David Williams September 5, 2011 at 3:00 AM hey Caryl congrats on a superb 1st place win, loved it first time round..David

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 5, 2011 at 2:49 AM Congrats Caryl on a dynamic first place win with these exquisite words of Crystalline Euphony luv.. enjoy top spot for top notch poetry.. Caryl Ramsdale September 16, 2011 at 1:17 PM I really appreciate your remarks Linda-Marie. Thank you! CR

John Freeman September 5, 2011 at 12:39 AM Great Job Caryl, Thanks...Congratulations on your worthy first place. Agape, Moses Caryl Ramsdale September 5, 2011 at 12:53 AM John: What a wonderful surprise for you to recognize my work as worthy. I am deeply honored sir! Thank you very much. CR

Gwendolen Song September 5, 2011 at 12:23 AM Caryl~You had the luck of the angels with you on this one..just gorgeous and serine. Congrats. Gwendolen Caryl Ramsdale September 5, 2011 at 12:36 AM Gwen: Thank you for seeing the effort behind the words. I am so pleased with my win. I will be congratulating you too for your win in John's contest. Have another creative day tomorrow and thanks for letting me know I placed. CR

Jack Horne September 4, 2011 at 3:52 PM What beautiful imagery! Caryl Ramsdale September 4, 2011 at 11:50 PM Oh thank you my friend. CR

Margaret Foster September 4, 2011 at 3:45 AM A white curtain falls and all is peace. I love it. thank you for your kind comments Caryl. regards Marg Caryl Ramsdale September 4, 2011 at 10:22 AM Margaret: Thank you for reading and commenting. CR

S.Jagathsimhan Nair September 3, 2011 at 10:20 PM thnks for your comments..this one looks very special in the way u look at it, good luck, jag Caryl Ramsdale September 4, 2011 at 10:23 AM Jag: I appreciate your kind comment. Thank you for reading. CR

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