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A White Curtain Falls

Time unwinds where river tears spill O’er river rock, when angels stand still. Caryl Ramsdale Copyright © 2011 All rights reserved. Crystalline Poetry Form Caryl Ramsdale September 3, 2011 “Crystalline Euphony“ contest by john freeman 1st Place 9/4/201

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/7/2012 11:37:00 AM

When I click on one of your poems I know it will be truly amazing Caryl. Thank you for sharing your words with us. I hope all is well with you and yours. I will stop back again soon. Love, Carol

Jack Horne

Date: 9/24/2011 3:29:00 PM

Beautiful piece, Caryl. Love it

Helen The Poet

Date: 9/14/2011 7:39:00 PM

It's amazing how*tearing up* in so little words you can describe that so dramatically

Caryl Ramsdale
Date: 9/16/2011 1:04:00 PM

Hi Helen...I have been practicing writing each line of every poem like it is the only...and I've been concentrating on writing short poetry forms. I think my writing skills are improving because I write this way. Thanks for the encouragement. CR

Caryl Ramsdale

Date: 9/13/2011 12:23:00 PM

Dear fellow poet: Taking a time out while I organize my collection of poetry forms. Be back soon! CR

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/12/2011 10:34:00 AM

I would like to take this time to thank you for your kind words on my poetry. I would also like to let you know I always enjoy reading your wonderful poetry Caryl. Love, Carol

Caryl Ramsdale
Date: 9/16/2011 1:06:00 PM

I enjoy reading your works Carol. I learn from reading. Thanks you for always leaving behind a kind comment when you read mine. CR

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/8/2011 11:33:00 PM

such a well deserved win.Congratulations, CAryl.

Caryl Ramsdale
Date: 9/16/2011 1:07:00 PM

Thanks Andrea your remarks are always an encouragement. CR

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/6/2011 6:55:00 PM

Contratulations on the first place win in the contest, Caryl

Caryl Ramsdale
Date: 9/16/2011 1:08:00 PM

Thank you Dr. Mehta I appreciate your comments. Have a peaceful day filled with blessings! CR

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/6/2011 10:00:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in John Moses Freeman's "Crystalline Euphony" contest Caryl. Love, Carol

Caryl Ramsdale
Date: 9/16/2011 1:08:00 PM

Thanks Carol! CR

Francine Roberts

Date: 9/5/2011 10:53:00 PM

absolutely lovely, congrats on your well deserved first place win

Caryl Ramsdale
Date: 9/16/2011 1:09:00 PM

Thanks for reading and commenting Francine. Have a fun day at the Soup! CR

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 9/5/2011 6:40:00 PM

Nice piece,fine rhymes,deserved win.Congratulations Caryl...

Caryl Ramsdale
Date: 9/16/2011 1:10:00 PM

Thanks! Have another creative day filled with blessings my friend. CR

Jack Horne

Date: 9/5/2011 4:01:00 PM

Many congrats on all your wins, Caryl : )

Caryl Ramsdale
Date: 9/16/2011 1:10:00 PM

Hi Jack...thanks sir! CR

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/5/2011 2:38:00 PM

How lovely, Caryl. Congratulations on your first place in John's contest. Love, Carolyn

Caryl Ramsdale
Date: 9/16/2011 1:11:00 PM

Thank you very much Carolyn. Your comments are appreciated. CR

Sunflower Poetess

Date: 9/5/2011 9:38:00 AM

Caryl, congratulations on your first place win with this magnificent write. Keep your wonderful poems flowing. Love, Glenna

Caryl Ramsdale
Date: 9/16/2011 1:12:00 PM

Thank you very much for the kind comment Glenna. Have a fun day at the Soup! CR

Kash Poet

Date: 9/5/2011 9:29:00 AM

Congrats Caryl on your win..this is wonderful!

Caryl Ramsdale
Date: 9/16/2011 1:13:00 PM

I appreciate your remarks kash...Have a great day! CR

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/5/2011 9:16:00 AM

Congrats on your win..I knew that it would..Sara

Caryl Ramsdale
Date: 9/16/2011 1:13:00 PM

Thanks Sara! CR

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 9/5/2011 7:18:00 AM

Well written piece, and many congrats on your frst place win.....Michael

Caryl Ramsdale
Date: 9/16/2011 1:14:00 PM

Michael: Thank you for the comments you leave behind. I appreciate your remarks! CR

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/5/2011 7:00:00 AM

Hey there Caryl, so glad to see this one on top :) Congratulations on your win with this beauty :)

Caryl Ramsdale
Date: 9/16/2011 1:15:00 PM

Wilma: You are always encouraging others. Thanks for encouraging me. CR

Margaret Foster

Date: 9/5/2011 4:40:00 AM

Well done Caryl with this lovely piece. I thought it would do well. many thanks . Marg

Caryl Ramsdale
Date: 9/16/2011 1:16:00 PM

Hi Margaret, Thank you! CR

David Williams

Date: 9/5/2011 3:00:00 AM

hey Caryl congrats on a superb 1st place win, loved it first time round..David

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/5/2011 2:49:00 AM

Congrats Caryl on a dynamic first place win with these exquisite words of Crystalline Euphony luv.. enjoy top spot for top notch poetry..

Caryl Ramsdale
Date: 9/16/2011 1:17:00 PM

I really appreciate your remarks Linda-Marie. Thank you! CR

John Freeman

Date: 9/5/2011 12:39:00 AM

Great Job Caryl, Thanks...Congratulations on your worthy first place. Agape, Moses

Caryl Ramsdale
Date: 9/5/2011 12:53:00 AM

John: What a wonderful surprise for you to recognize my work as worthy. I am deeply honored sir! Thank you very much. CR

Gwendolen Song

Date: 9/5/2011 12:23:00 AM

Caryl~You had the luck of the angels with you on this one..just gorgeous and serine. Congrats. Gwendolen

Caryl Ramsdale
Date: 9/5/2011 12:36:00 AM

Gwen: Thank you for seeing the effort behind the words. I am so pleased with my win. I will be congratulating you too for your win in John's contest. Have another creative day tomorrow and thanks for letting me know I placed. CR

Jack Horne

Date: 9/4/2011 3:52:00 PM

What beautiful imagery!

Caryl Ramsdale
Date: 9/4/2011 11:50:00 PM

Oh thank you my friend. CR

Margaret Foster

Date: 9/4/2011 3:45:00 AM

A white curtain falls and all is peace. I love it. thank you for your kind comments Caryl. regards Marg

Caryl Ramsdale
Date: 9/4/2011 10:22:00 AM

Margaret: Thank you for reading and commenting. CR