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A White Crown

A white crown lay at her bottom limbs Like a wreath hung upon the door When the death angel comes grim Lost blossoms fall no more Camellia's white blooms Full coverage Now ungroomed Rained down Boom
Camellia Japonica a shrub/tree that does well in the south..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Makama Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 10:14 AM
The bliss from this page cannot be exhausted. This is incredible and wonderful. Great lines and an awesome 7
Bickerstaffe Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 12:57 PM
A splendid NONET Sara... sweet grammatical flow from nine down to one. Well done my dear! Best wishes, Keith
Dietrich Avatar
December 30, 2015 at 8:04 PM
Came by to say Happy New Year,Sara. In a rush at the moment gotta finish here to make joe's dinner!
A   Avatar
December 30, 2015 at 3:08 PM
Sara, a beautiful Nonet...Happy New Year ~LINDA~
Devnath  Avatar
December 29, 2015 at 12:12 PM
Beautiful Camellia's white blooms like a white crown. Beautiful imagery. Loved always my sweet friend. Loved always,bl
Dietrich Avatar
December 27, 2015 at 4:04 PM
great personification of this beautiful shrub, Sara.
Onclaud Avatar
December 26, 2015 at 2:26 PM
a most stunning write, sara... i like!..huggs
Andresen Avatar
December 26, 2015 at 1:06 PM
- Is Camelia their names? - A beautiful plant and lovely poem, Sara - Enjoy the rest of Christmas :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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