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A Welcome Sign

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He saw her holding up a sign: "Welcome Home Daddy", scrawled in red crayon by a blue-eyed angel. After months in the desert this soldier found his oasis.
Kim Merryman Giveme A Sign contest by Nette Onclaud 5/16/15

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Date: 6/6/2015 11:24:00 PM
Kim, congratulations on your win. Forever **SKAT**
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/7/2015 7:45:00 PM
Thank you, Skat! Your comments are always appreciated!
Date: 6/6/2015 9:03:00 PM
Girl how do you think of these things? three wow wees.....fantastic...
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/7/2015 7:43:00 PM
Thank you, Judy! My son is in the army and he has a blue eyed baby girl. I just thought of him coming home from a deployment. Fortunately he has only deployed once to Afghanistan but made it home just in time to see his daughter born. Currently he's in Korea.
Date: 6/6/2015 3:28:00 PM
Well done Kim. So many feelings contained in one tiny poem.
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/7/2015 7:39:00 PM
Thank you, John! I appreciate your kind comments.
Date: 6/6/2015 1:22:00 PM
this is just wonderful. One of my faves in the contest. Congrats for your win, Kim.
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/7/2015 7:38:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea! I'm glad you liked it! Your encouragement means a lot to me.
Date: 6/6/2015 10:18:00 AM
such an emotional write perfectly captured in so few words - many congrats on your win love your take on the theme! Hugs jan xx
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/7/2015 7:37:00 PM
Thank you, Jan! I appreciate your encouraging comments!
Date: 6/6/2015 9:56:00 AM
I love this, Kim. There is so much emotion in these home-comings, and you captured the moment of one of them. Congrats on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/7/2015 7:35:00 PM
Thank you, Sandra! So glad you liked it.
Date: 6/6/2015 9:47:00 AM
Such a lovely and welcoming poem, Kim. Struck on the oasis in the desert connection. Congrats on a fine win! // paul
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/7/2015 7:34:00 PM
Thank you, Paul! I appreciate your comments.
Date: 6/6/2015 8:13:00 AM
Beautiful write Kim, Congrats on your win
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/7/2015 7:33:00 PM
Thank you, Joseph!
Date: 5/23/2015 12:25:00 AM
This gives me the warm and tingly feeling, loved it, very very sweet!
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Kim Merryman
Date: 5/24/2015 12:24:00 PM
Thank you, Arthur! Glad you liked it.
Date: 5/20/2015 7:32:00 PM
I feel, I can see them! This short poem packs the hidden emotion behind such reunion. A 7. Blessings for the contest, Kim!
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Kim Merryman
Date: 5/20/2015 9:00:00 PM
Thank you for your encouraging words, Kim!
Date: 5/17/2015 12:38:00 AM
This is a well written piece. It was as though I wittnesed the soldier reuniting with his little girl. -Alexis
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Kim Merryman
Date: 5/20/2015 8:58:00 PM
Thank you for your encouraging comment, Alexis!

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