Jan Allison Poet Acrostic

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A Wee Hummingbird

Amazing

Wings
Exercising
Endlessly

Hovering
Unceasingly,
Magnificent
Metabolism
Imbibing
Nectar
Greedily
Beautifully
Iridescent
Really
Delightful!

Three Word Acrostics Poetry Contest
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I would love to see a hummingbird for real one day!

10/2/19

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Jeanne Mcgee October 12, 2019 at 7:48 PM What a beauty you wrote in a wee few words you expressed their delight. Congrats Jan.

Kim Rodrigues October 7, 2019 at 6:55 AM This is beautiful! I saw hummingbirds a couple years ago in my friend’s glorious backyard! May you be so blessed! <3 Kim

Sandra Adams October 5, 2019 at 9:40 PM i told you you aced this one Jan, congratulations on your first place win! :) hugs

Eve Roper October 4, 2019 at 2:22 PM perfect 1st place Acrostic, Jan, many congratulations . hugs

Ann Gilmour October 4, 2019 at 12:22 PM Many congrats Jan on your top place win, with this wonderful acrostic bringing to life the most exquisite bird. Well done my friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Heidi Sands October 4, 2019 at 11:41 AM Congratulations for your top win Jan :)

Brenda Chiri October 4, 2019 at 11:34 AM Jan this was great congrats on your win!;)

Gershon Wolf October 4, 2019 at 10:45 AM Wow, Jan: Not only are you the 'Limerick Queen,' you are the 'Contest Queen' too!! You have done the Isle of Man proud! I propose changing its name to the Isle of Woman, in honor of you! Congrats on your top finish in Bobby's contest with this delightful, nevertheless accurate, write!! :) :) gw

Anne-Lise Andresen October 4, 2019 at 10:15 AM - Re-visit with congratulations on your top win, Jan :) - happy hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Alexis Y. October 4, 2019 at 9:57 AM Hi Jan, I knew you would place high with this amazing write. Congratulations on your top. It was well deserved. Enjoy the rest of your day:-) Alexis

Connie Marcum Wong October 4, 2019 at 9:44 AM How beautifully your acrostic describes my favorite little bird Jan. Big Congratulations on your Trophy win with this gem! xxoo

Hello There October 4, 2019 at 9:20 AM Aw, I love this delightful piece and the lovely addition of pictures ~ Congratulations on your win <3

Regina Mcintosh October 4, 2019 at 8:59 AM I'm back to say congratulations...… I love that you won and I want you to see a hummingbird for real … You would love them. Blessings always, Gina

Bobby May October 4, 2019 at 8:38 AM JAN, this poem was the only one about a living creature that caught my eye, excellent, Congratulations on your win!! We have tons of Humming birds here, I will send one to you!! Bobby May October 4, 2019 at 9:17 AM It wasn't the only one about living creatures but I love humming birds

Bette Bavington October 3, 2019 at 11:58 AM This is truly a wonderful poem describing a Hummingbird. I am glad I got to read it.

Regina Mcintosh October 3, 2019 at 9:27 AM You mean you've never seen one!!!?? WOW... They're amazing, always on the go, so energetic... Lovely and beautiful - Your poem is awesome as usual. God bless you

P.S. Awtry October 3, 2019 at 9:09 AM And this is delightful! Well done!

Joseph May October 2, 2019 at 9:42 PM Such beautiful birds, Nicely done Jan. GL in the contest. Jan Allison October 3, 2019 at 6:44 AM Thanks Joseph:-) Hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y. October 2, 2019 at 9:30 PM WoW! Jan, You did an excellent job. I found this challenge difficult, but you my friend nailed it. I saw a hummingbird before and it's such a fascinating thing to behold. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Have a wonderful evening:-) Alexis Jan Allison October 3, 2019 at 6:43 AM Thanks Alexis:-) Hugs Jan xx

Heidi Sands October 2, 2019 at 5:33 PM Excellent! So well done Jan :) I also love feeding the hummingbirds :) Jan Allison October 3, 2019 at 6:43 AM I'm getting more envious with each comment I get, I would love to see them for real:-) Hugs Jan xx

Rico Leffanta October 2, 2019 at 5:02 PM Lots of really wild hummingbirds on the Apache Reservation that won't hesitate to attack you. Even their nests are a quite remarkable thing of beauty. I would send you a photo but soup mail does not allow attachments. Aloha! Rico Jan Allison October 3, 2019 at 6:42 AM Aww I will have to Google their nests thanks for the info rico:-) Hugs Jan xx

Ilene Bauer October 2, 2019 at 3:34 PM you've done a great job with this challenge, jan! i love the poem! i see hummingbirds at my country place and love to watch them at the feeders or dipping into flowers - they're very cool! Jan Allison October 3, 2019 at 6:41 AM It sou ds idyllic to have a country place:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen October 2, 2019 at 1:02 PM - Magnificent ... Amazing ... and Beautifully, Jan :) - Luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Jan Allison October 3, 2019 at 6:40 AM Thanks sweet friend:-) Hugs Jan xx

Darlene De Beaulieu October 2, 2019 at 1:02 PM Hello Jan, I love the humming birds. I have never seen one either. Perhaps one day I will. Have a nice day my friend. Jan Allison October 3, 2019 at 6:40 AM I hope we both get to see them Darlene:-) Hugs Jan xx

Carolyn Devonshire October 2, 2019 at 12:56 PM Indeed, the hummingbird's wings appear to be fluttering endlessly. I've seen them in Florida and in New Hampshire. Perhaps there are none in your area, but that didn't stop you from creating a beautiful entry for Bobby's contest. Best wishes for success, Carolyn Jan Allison October 3, 2019 at 6:39 AM We do t have them in the uk:-( Hugs Jan xx

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