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A Watchful World

waterfall spirits rise dreams drown under pressure to perform elders swarm like naked children at the lake just laugh at those mistakes no one really understands past present we pretend watchful eyes never end lifelines protected perches hold on to our saving grace heads high there's a world to face

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Date: 1/23/2017 12:34:00 PM
Yes there is always a world to face..and may our heads will always be held high.
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Date: 1/23/2017 12:02:00 PM
Unique write Tim; a suspenseful time for the future indeed...
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Date: 1/23/2017 12:56:00 AM
Watchful world, eyes all aimed at you over there... I am sure that's not the meaning of the poem, but I just had to say it. No one really understands.
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Date: 1/22/2017 5:59:00 PM
I like this and especially the first 2 lines, I am sure there is more to this than I am reading, but loved it none the less!
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Date: 1/22/2017 10:03:00 AM
Yes - pressure and opinion. I like the stoic, "worlds to face." Love, daver
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Date: 1/22/2017 9:05:00 AM
Nice write, Tim:) How bout them Patriots??
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Tim Smith
Date: 1/22/2017 9:20:00 AM
They are tough to beat

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