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A Waste of Oxygen

A TOTAL WASTE OF OXYGEN As we turn the pages of our life And we reach the final chapter We realize it's been pretty entertaining Now what the hell comes after Well it all depends on who you talk to No one has a definitive answer Until you reach that crossover point Hopefully avoiding dreaded cancer If there was a way of maybe a preview To prepare us for what's to come We might wanna change this and that To delay that last final run Guess I don't want to know the exact date Kinda freaky I'd hasten to say When approaching that final moment What would be my last foray What if I've done nothing really special I die and I'm all but forgotten That dreaded fear, it was all for nothing A total waste of oxygen

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 2/7/2018 10:13:00 AM
Word!!! That means well said in STREET talk.. Just waiting for you to put on ya hoodie... lol... This is a deep sad poem, LimmerJack will never be forgotten and his oxygen will forever illuminate the cyberpages of Poetry soup....
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Jack Ellison
Date: 2/7/2018 11:02:00 AM
What a friend I have in thee, kinnd gentleman!!! Don't know no street talk but thanks!!! LOL We're having a wicked series of snow storms currently and I'm scheduled for a driver's test on Friday!!! Should get cancelled! I'm still an A-1+++++ driver though, don't know why they have to keep testing me... I keep telling them I'm terrific!!!
Date: 2/7/2018 9:43:00 AM
Well said my friend. Hugs fom the East! mo mo
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Jack Ellison
Date: 2/7/2018 10:52:00 AM
Are you getting the snow yer??? BUMMER!!! xoxox
Date: 2/7/2018 7:11:00 AM
Limerick Jack WILL never be forgotten,and don't get any ideas of slinking off. Who else could provide our limerick fix. Regards Tom
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Jack Ellison
Date: 2/7/2018 7:15:00 AM
Blame that SO guy!!! LOL Worry not, my limerick flow is unstoppable!!! GOOD MORNING GOOD FRIEND!!!

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