A Warm Penalty

Your penalty for the last night's fight - a warm hug
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Kendrick Avatar
February 19, 2019 at 4:22 PM
Interesting work. Enjoyed reading this one. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
Vangaveti Avatar
February 19, 2019 at 10:05 PM
Thank you so much Sara :)
Callus Avatar
February 18, 2019 at 10:00 AM
Nothing like a warm hug as a sign of love and forgiveness, Swetha! ~ Regards // paul
Vangaveti Avatar
February 19, 2019 at 10:04 PM
Very true Paul :)
Dietrich Avatar
February 13, 2019 at 8:32 PM
this is a really good one liner. Wow.
Vangaveti Avatar
February 19, 2019 at 10:04 PM
Thank you so much :)
Nicole Avatar
February 13, 2019 at 1:30 PM
Oh my!! The best way to make up, after a fight. Perhaps a soft kiss will follow, the next time. One line says it all. :) Brandy
Vangaveti Avatar
February 19, 2019 at 10:03 PM
Oh yeah Brandy. You are there :D A kiss would surely melt the ice :)
Wolf Avatar
February 13, 2019 at 10:15 AM
Aw, this is perfect, just perfect! An instant FAVE for me, Swetha. :) :)
Vangaveti Avatar
February 19, 2019 at 10:02 PM
Thank you Gershon :)
Krutsinger Avatar
February 11, 2019 at 11:44 PM
Ah, I have been there. It is interesting how much good a hug will do toward restoring peace.
Vangaveti Avatar
February 12, 2019 at 10:13 AM
Yes Caren. It answers all the unasked questions too :)
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