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A Warm Penalty

Your penalty for the last night's fight - a warm hug

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 2/19/2019 4:22:00 PM
Interesting work. Enjoyed reading this one. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
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Swetha Vangaveti
Date: 2/19/2019 10:05:00 PM
Thank you so much Sara :)
Date: 2/18/2019 10:00:00 AM
Nothing like a warm hug as a sign of love and forgiveness, Swetha! ~ Regards // paul
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Swetha Vangaveti
Date: 2/19/2019 10:04:00 PM
Very true Paul :)
Date: 2/13/2019 8:32:00 PM
this is a really good one liner. Wow.
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Swetha Vangaveti
Date: 2/19/2019 10:04:00 PM
Thank you so much :)
Date: 2/13/2019 1:30:00 PM
Oh my!! The best way to make up, after a fight. Perhaps a soft kiss will follow, the next time. One line says it all. :) Brandy
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Swetha Vangaveti
Date: 2/19/2019 10:03:00 PM
Oh yeah Brandy. You are there :D A kiss would surely melt the ice :)
Date: 2/13/2019 10:15:00 AM
Aw, this is perfect, just perfect! An instant FAVE for me, Swetha. :) :)
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Swetha Vangaveti
Date: 2/19/2019 10:02:00 PM
Thank you Gershon :)
Date: 2/11/2019 11:44:00 PM
Ah, I have been there. It is interesting how much good a hug will do toward restoring peace.
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Swetha Vangaveti
Date: 2/12/2019 10:13:00 AM
Yes Caren. It answers all the unasked questions too :)

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