A Wandered Mind

Sprawled about the blanket spread
Minding the business of her own
Her mind led, far astray
By her thoughts, she is overthrown.
She dreams of a heaven
Beyond her meagre skill
Far-fetched from cold reality
Though reached from power of will.
For her it appears a lifetime
But to us a patient while
Stationed soundly at my feet
Though her head a ’wandered mile.
And itched along her rested neck
My hand so ever tender
Her head arose, so much confused 
And query from my brain did render.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Richardson Avatar
July 8, 2012 at 2:52 PM
Please leave feedback on all my poems, I welcome constructive critisism aswell, thanks!
Kendrick Avatar
July 8, 2012 at 2:51 PM
Interesting work..Sara
Richardson Avatar
July 8, 2012 at 2:59 PM
Thanks!
St.Cross Avatar
July 8, 2012 at 2:54 PM
*.j No Baby, Tis Your Loveliness, That Is Interesting *.* How Can A Girl Be Sooo Beautiful ? J.*
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