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A Walk By the Sea

Glee sans fees Slaps my face, the chilled breeze The horizon, light breaks A great vision, eyes grasp Early snowflakes, light takes. To obliterate blues, I Inhale energy from those picturesque hues. The waves nudge my legs, wash my soiled soul Crest and troughs of tides, preach to face life Bearing the fierce sun, sea sets the goal, embracing tons of secrets, she grins. Walking by her side, my soul just learnt Dust inside, the first to dump in bin And so ego and vaunting, I waive. To show, fame is short-termed, in sand, footprints I leave, my name I engrave
July 26 2021 For the contest 'A 3-6-9 Tesla' by Emile pinet

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Date: 7/26/2021 9:24:00 PM
Beautiful verse, Supraja, just stunning with great imagery and feeling every-moment. The waves against my feet and washing the grains of sand off. The warm sun and breeze playing a flirtatious play on my face. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/26/2021 5:03:00 PM
wow, the images are amazing. Loved the line of eyes grasping a vision!
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Date: 7/26/2021 6:25:00 AM
Your imagery is impeccable. Superb poem. Best for a win.
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Date: 7/26/2021 5:33:00 AM
Enjoyed the walk with you in this write. Beautiful images, Supraja. All the best.
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Date: 7/26/2021 5:22:00 AM
Great imagery. Last 3 lines superb! Meaningful
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Date: 7/26/2021 4:11:00 AM
Very nice. Well written :)
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