A Waiting Game of Song

A Waiting Game of Song

In life's journey, many a woman gets lost along the way
Of this, I know for sure most definitely I do have to say
Some people say if you have a softness and lightness
Of how certain types of poets, writers, authors can convey
An all ulterior false of humanistic proximity in realities I say.

Can leave an innocent and endearing poet or writer hurting in their heart
In all unknown circumstances whom can say if they are right or wrong
Can thou cast an interior or exterior absolution which does belong?
Dare I say we all have shed many a tear within our mortal souls their art.

Has there ever been a true love that has ever long and last
Can a woman and a man; be so in tune and never will cast
A disillusioned broken heart may mend in time
In every waking hour of every day, minute, second and hour
I'll always think of your charismatic charms of willful power.

Someday almost many people in love say it’s just a waiting game
Many people contemplate and call it just a cruel kind of a name
If I could feel your heart sing a song full of artistic fine gifted love
Maybe someday we'll stay and sing a rhapsody of how we feel of

A concerto of how love can and be so ever loving and deliciously bring
Then we'll be forever enveloped in a powerful tune that can really sing
Then we'll be forever enveloped in a powerful tune that can really sing.

03/02/2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 5/15/2016 5:18:00 PM
Brill piece Eden, really setting your standard high with this first one on PS, trust you'll enjoy it here, blessings, Gordon
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Date: 4/14/2016 5:31:00 AM
Eden,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Eden Barton
Date: 4/15/2016 4:30:00 AM
Thank you so very much Linda for your great welcoming comment and invite to this poetry site.
Date: 4/14/2016 5:29:00 AM
Hi Eden, Nice first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Wish u a successful journey ahead........hugs
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Eden Barton
Date: 4/14/2016 12:00:00 PM
Thank you so very much Dalei for your very beautiful comment and especially wishing me well on my journey with Poetry Soup... hugs
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