A Visitation Memory

One night my dear dog, a miniature Eskimo
which I’d been forced to give to a no-kill shelter a few years earlier
appeared as I slept. Waking, I saw him on my bed!
Into my arms he leapt! With joy and surprise I pressed
my face into his long white fur. I could feel him and inhale his scent.
Oh, it felt much too real to have only been a dream!
Shortly thereafter, I fell back into a dream in which
I wandered the streets with my beloved Ollyver.

I always wondered if that occurrence had been real.
I believe that we have spirits that go elsewhere when we die.
Though my experience could have been a dream inside a dream,
I prefer the explanation that because he had loved me so much,
the spirit of my little dog paid me a visit
on his way to another world, and he waits for me there even now!

Oct. 1, 2020
for "The Unexplained" Poetry Contest of Carolyn Devonshire
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Marc Avatar
October 2, 2020 at 6:10 PM
That was so sweet Andrea. I love it.
Watt Avatar
October 2, 2020 at 5:06 PM
Back to congratulate you Andrea!
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October 2, 2020 at 2:13 PM
Congratulations, Andrea, having a great placement with a great narrative!!
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October 2, 2020 at 11:02 AM
Dreams do seem very real sometimes, Andrea. In this case, I would agree that your dog paid you a visit. A heartwarming narrative. Congratulations on your win! Best wishes, Carolyn
Andresen Avatar
October 2, 2020 at 10:44 AM
- Congratulations on your 2nd place in the contest, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Watt Avatar
October 1, 2020 at 9:35 PM
Another lovely tribute to your beloved Ollyver and the very special moments he gave you before finally saying goodbye. A beautiful memory to hold onto and commit to poetry - perfect for this contest theme. All my best ~ John
Pandit Avatar
October 1, 2020 at 12:08 PM
Yes it was real..even if not physically there. Sweet memories, Andrea.
Andresen Avatar
October 1, 2020 at 12:03 PM
- Yes, he's waiting for you .... I'm sure of it - Lovely written, Andrea :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Leffanta Avatar
October 1, 2020 at 11:12 AM
My late wife had a similar dream about a Blue Persian cat that died in England's quarantine. Comfort is indeed unexplained! Aloha! Rico
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