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A Visitation Memory

One night my dear dog, a miniature Eskimo which I’d been forced to give to a no-kill shelter a few years earlier appeared as I slept. Waking, I saw him on my bed! Into my arms he leapt! With joy and surprise I pressed my face into his long white fur. I could feel him and inhale his scent. Oh, it felt much too real to have only been a dream! Shortly thereafter, I fell back into a dream in which I wandered the streets with my beloved Ollyver. I always wondered if that occurrence had been real. I believe that we have spirits that go elsewhere when we die. Though my experience could have been a dream inside a dream, I prefer the explanation that because he had loved me so much, the spirit of my little dog paid me a visit on his way to another world, and he waits for me there even now! Oct. 1, 2020 for "The Unexplained" Poetry Contest of Carolyn Devonshire

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Date: 10/2/2020 6:10:00 PM
That was so sweet Andrea. I love it.
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Date: 10/2/2020 5:06:00 PM
Back to congratulate you Andrea!
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Date: 10/2/2020 2:13:00 PM
Congratulations, Andrea, having a great placement with a great narrative!!
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Date: 10/2/2020 11:02:00 AM
Dreams do seem very real sometimes, Andrea. In this case, I would agree that your dog paid you a visit. A heartwarming narrative. Congratulations on your win! Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 10/2/2020 10:44:00 AM
- Congratulations on your 2nd place in the contest, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/1/2020 9:35:00 PM
Another lovely tribute to your beloved Ollyver and the very special moments he gave you before finally saying goodbye. A beautiful memory to hold onto and commit to poetry - perfect for this contest theme. All my best ~ John
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Date: 10/1/2020 12:08:00 PM
Yes it was real..even if not physically there. Sweet memories, Andrea.
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Date: 10/1/2020 12:03:00 PM
- Yes, he's waiting for you .... I'm sure of it - Lovely written, Andrea :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/1/2020 11:12:00 AM
My late wife had a similar dream about a Blue Persian cat that died in England's quarantine. Comfort is indeed unexplained! Aloha! Rico
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