Jan Allison Poet Nonet

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Fiction poem for rhyming nonet contest

A Visit To Weight Watcher's

Weigh
today ...
Dare I say
ate huge buffet
followed by sorbet
Guess I got lead astray ....
(was dining with best friend Faye)
I’m anxious what the scales will say -
lost over a kilo - that’s okay!

Rhyming Nonet Poetry Contest

Sponsored by Charles Messina

11/1/19

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Joseph May November 15, 2019 at 8:18 AM Nicely done Jan, Congrats on your win

Connie Marcum Wong November 14, 2019 at 8:27 PM Congratulations on your wonderful first placement! Made me smile! : ) xxoo

Anne-Lise Andresen November 14, 2019 at 1:23 PM - Congratulations, Jan :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Adams November 14, 2019 at 11:57 AM such a witty and clever poem...congrats on your win ...hugs

Alexis Y. November 14, 2019 at 6:42 AM Hi Jan, I'm not surprised you're in the winners circle. Congratulations on your 1st place win. Have a great day my friend:-) Alexis

Andrea Dietrich November 13, 2019 at 8:40 PM awesome, jan. Kind of fits in with that poem of me and Leslie!

Charles Messina November 13, 2019 at 6:57 PM Love this humorous write Jan. Congratulations on your 1st place win! Hugs // Charlie xx

Jack Horne November 6, 2019 at 3:07 PM LOL, thanks for the fun writes - tried to leave a comment for 'robin' too but couldn't...

Alexis Y. November 6, 2019 at 7:58 AM Lol! Jan, This is so funny. I'm sure many can relate to it( I sure did). Thanksgiving is coming and I'm not going no where near the scale! I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Have a nice day my friend:-) Alexis

Caren Krutsinger November 6, 2019 at 2:31 AM So incredibly funny, and I have been to Weight Watchers. So I understand fully what is going on here. Clapping now.

Carolyn Devonshire November 5, 2019 at 9:57 AM Help! There seems no way to escape the calories. Perhaps we should get weighed before we eat... Thanks for giving us some great laughs, Jan. Best wishes in the contest. Hugs, Carolyn

Judy Ball November 5, 2019 at 3:38 AM This really made me smile my friend. You must have had lead weights sewn into your hems before to lose that much. lol Love this. Good luck in the contest. God Bless, JB

Jean Murray November 4, 2019 at 5:27 PM "lost over a kilo"?...that has to be fiction!

Lindsay Laurie November 3, 2019 at 6:14 PM G'day Jan … well done Jan. A visit to the 'fat police' can be a bit harrowing - thanks Jan - Lindsay

Christopher Flaherty November 3, 2019 at 5:29 PM Eat all you want Buffet . Small Print Must be in Weight Watchers And only on Weigh in Night

Tania Kitchin November 3, 2019 at 4:42 PM A great Nonet Jan, cute and entertaining! :)

Richard Lamoureux November 3, 2019 at 7:27 AM This made me smile. No I can go back to my See Food Diet. Jan Allison November 3, 2019 at 12:52 PM I know the see food diet too lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Caren Krutsinger November 2, 2019 at 2:36 PM Congratulations! I am proud of you! Jan Allison November 3, 2019 at 12:51 PM Its pure fiction Caren:-) hugs Jan xx

Line Gauthier November 1, 2019 at 9:36 PM Fun poem, Jan. Jan Allison November 3, 2019 at 12:32 PM thanks Line:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich November 1, 2019 at 8:31 PM this is very cute. I love it, Jan. I had no idea about this contest. One that sounds very fun to me!! Jan Allison November 3, 2019 at 12:32 PM A rhyming nonet - you will ace it I am sure Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx

Rico Leffanta November 1, 2019 at 7:56 PM Fabulous finale! Aloha! Rico Jan Allison November 3, 2019 at 12:31 PM thanks Rico:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues November 1, 2019 at 5:20 PM Cute one! Jan Allison November 1, 2019 at 6:41 PM thanks Kim:-) hugs Jan xx

Gordon Mcconnell November 1, 2019 at 4:46 PM A fine write Jan, really cool with nice imagery. Blessings, Gordon Jan Allison November 1, 2019 at 6:41 PM thanks Gordon:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen November 1, 2019 at 4:11 PM - Eat and enjoy the food ... don't think about the weight - Batteries in my weight have expired ...a long time ago :) - A lovely write, Jan ... best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Jan Allison November 1, 2019 at 4:23 PM thanks Anne-Lise :-) I've never been on a diet in my life guess I am lucky as many struggle:-) hugs Jan xx

Chris Green November 1, 2019 at 3:13 PM This fun and entertaining poem would be a 10 on anyone's scale my friend. Best wishes in the contest. Jan Allison November 1, 2019 at 3:17 PM Thanks Chris:-) I actually started another poem but then this idea came to me - its quite a challenge with the rhyme and syllable counts:-) hugs Jan xx

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