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A Visit To the Hygienist

The hygienist cleaned my teeth And gave a little lecture. "Your flossing isn't good enough;" It wasn't just conjecture. I'm sure that it was obvious My efforts were exquisite In just the week or two before My 6-month dental visit. I brush each morning and each night But more than that's annoying. Unless a poppy seed is stuck, No floss I'll be employing. So twice a year I suck it up And listen to her chiding. At least a saddle for her very High horse I'm providing.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 3/23/2018 9:09:00 PM
Bravo!!!! Sounds like my last visit to the dentist. Really nice Ilene
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Date: 3/23/2018 6:14:00 PM
I like the flow and your ability to find poetic expression in everyday situations Bravo!
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Date: 3/23/2018 1:05:00 PM
Lovely verse ilene, I always have the lecture, shouldn't eat this and that. Why does all the nice food ruin teeth.
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Date: 3/23/2018 12:26:00 PM
Oh so true Ilene I don't floss either just get them to remove the scale lol I went to the dentist on Monday got 6 months now to make improvements or not lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/23/2018 11:27:00 AM
Great poem!!! Hysterical, and soooo true!
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