A Virus

A virus takes your energy
And everything it saps
Results in lack of everything 
Except, of course, for naps.

sickrhyme

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Deb M

January 22, 2025 at 1:26 PM

Its awful being unwell ilene…l hope you feel better very quickly! Debx

Anne-Lise Andresen

January 22, 2025 at 2:42 AM

- Virus drains you of all your energy... it's normal to feel both weak and useless... hope you get well soon, Ilene :) - hugs

Ilene Bauer

January 22, 2025 at 5:30 AM

Thank you so much, Anne-Lise! I’m finally starting to feel a bit better. I appreciate the good wishes…..

Maurice Rigoler

January 21, 2025 at 6:27 AM

A virus can lay you low and recovery can be slow, but this much you should know: it's here today, gone tomorrow! Best wishes to you and hunny on a speedy recovery. Maurice

Ilene Bauer

January 22, 2025 at 5:31 AM

Love your rhyming comment, Maurice! Thank you for reaching out. Wish it lasted just a day, but we’re getting better now…

Hannah Borke

January 20, 2025 at 8:26 PM

Get well soon

Ilene Bauer

January 22, 2025 at 5:31 AM

Thank you, Hannah!

Gershon Wolf

January 20, 2025 at 8:12 PM

Reads like yon have come down with a virus, Ilene. I don't think I've ever -- ever -- seen a 4-line rhymer from you before. Feel better soon. ~ Gershon

Ilene Bauer

January 22, 2025 at 5:32 AM

Ha! Your comment made me laugh, Gershon, which is just what I needed! Thank you!