A Villanelle Affair

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Each graceful bird embrace air, charmingly, A morning dew slides to expecting leaves, One lovely dove sings above, pleasantries, Per bustling wind brush of things, breathlessly, Curling waves a surfer craves, surfboard heaves, Each graceful bird embrace air, charmingly, Frogs leaps as sheep's bleats unanimously, Boy hits scores, and hit's some more his pet peeves, One lovely dove sings above, pleasantries, An old man cast, trout sneak past, quietly, Falls cascade, swans glissades, a river weaves, Each graceful bird embrace air, charmingly, Girl recites, mom delights manifestly, Cow's calf, like, Doe's fawn, are natural cleaves, One lovely dove sings above, pleasantries, Scouts fire, hikers inspire, ideally, Christmas time, New Years time, best of the eves, Each graceful bird embrace air, charmingly, One lovely dove sings above, pleasantries, Date: 08/21/2019

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Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/21/2019 2:52:00 PM

Excellent Villanelle, William...breathtaking details and scenery...superb imagery..so well written!

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/21/2019 3:09:00 PM

I can always count on Vijay--Thanks! ~ Aloha William