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A View Through the Trees

a full moon is out
lilacs dance with sighing breeze
tall tree silhouettes

the lake is glassy
in the beauty of beyond
so still and peaceful

I hear the night birds
as my heart pitter patters
red mars is in sight
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Goldsmith Avatar
December 6, 2021 at 10:12 AM
A beautiful Haiku story/write and picture. I love to see the full moon. I watch for it each month. Have a blessed day...............
Buehler Avatar
December 6, 2021 at 10:39 AM
Thank you very much , Paula. Your taking time to enjoy the full moon is quite nice! Have a wonderful day yourself. :)
M  Avatar
November 23, 2021 at 3:25 PM
Hi Evelyn….a lovely poem. Debx
Buehler Avatar
November 23, 2021 at 8:52 PM
Thank you Deb. X
Y. Avatar
November 23, 2021 at 5:33 AM
WoW! Judy, Your string of haikus were just stunning. I enjoy the Moonlit view. Well done, have a nice day, and Happy Thanksgiving to you my friend:-) Alexis
Buehler Avatar
November 23, 2021 at 12:49 PM
Thank you, Alexis. It's so nice to read your lovely comment, so inspiring and joyful. I hope your Thanksgiving is blessed as well, dear Alexis. :=)
Ball Avatar
November 23, 2021 at 1:41 AM
Truly beautiful as always Evelyn. Reminds me of the nightly walks I used to take when my German Shepherd and my Rottweiler were alive. I loved our quiet nightly walks and since they are gone I no longer walks the streets at night. The pic here is breath taking. Love it. God Bless, JB
Buehler Avatar
November 23, 2021 at 12:54 PM
Thank you for your very kind words, Judy. They are wonderful to know. I'm sorry for the loss of your beloved dogs. Dogs really make one feel safe at night. Have a blessed Thanksgiving.
Poet Avatar
November 22, 2021 at 6:53 AM
Evelyn, you've written an incredible haiku. Brilliantly composed depiction of the evening. Your writing is consistently excellent.
Buehler Avatar
November 22, 2021 at 11:05 AM
I appreciate your warm sentiments very much, my friend. It's really nice to read your wonderful, positive remarks.
Horsman Avatar
November 22, 2021 at 5:39 AM
Yes truly lovely nights.
Buehler Avatar
November 22, 2021 at 11:07 AM
Thank you, Harry.
Buhagiar Avatar
November 22, 2021 at 1:09 AM
Beautiful description of night. Your poetry is always the best.~~
Buehler Avatar
November 22, 2021 at 11:08 AM
Thank you, Victor.
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