A View

a view upon a an ancient soul, a searching still from days of old, words do flow as he does mold, the past grows dimmer here, serenity bend his ear, the path to take unfolds... re: 'Only Me' Michael J. Falotico Don Johnson

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Debbie Duncan

Date: 12/20/2012 2:28:00 AM

I like this one Don,,, I shall have to see what inspired you ;}

David Williams

Date: 11/26/2012 11:20:00 AM

Don, you portray a good image here, good luck mate.....David

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/25/2012 10:29:00 PM

This is a wondrous write, full of peeking imagination! I really enjoyed reading this incredibly powerful poem this evening my friend! You sure can come up some of the best writes of all! You have written this perfect take on Michael's awesome poem! What an outstanding piece, Great Work!!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/25/2012 9:30:00 PM

Don, i have to stop by Michael's poems,,, i think I missed this one,,, good dedication,,, hope serenity hits full effect... xox~pd