A View

a view upon a an ancient soul,
a searching still from days of old,
words do flow as he does mold,
the past grows dimmer here,
serenity bend his ear,
the path to take unfolds...

re: 'Only Me'  Michael J. Falotico  

Don Johnson

adventurerhyme

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Debbie Duncan

December 20, 2012 at 2:28 AM

I like this one Don,,, I shall have to see what inspired you ;}

David Williams

November 26, 2012 at 11:20 AM

Don, you portray a good image here, good luck mate.....David

Russell Sivey

November 25, 2012 at 10:29 PM

This is a wondrous write, full of peeking imagination! I really enjoyed reading this incredibly powerful poem this evening my friend! You sure can come up some of the best writes of all! You have written this perfect take on Michael's awesome poem! What an outstanding piece, Great Work!!