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A Very Fine Line

I loved you -
I hate you!
And now I can’t wait to
See you fall from grace - like the stupid fool that you are -
(Right on cue)
That perfect mouth
I once kissed
Now just looks slack
And I’m pissed
That others even listen
To the phoney nonsense you spew!
Those big muscled arms
That once saved me from harm
Seem to drag with your knuckles
On the floor,
And those dumb little jokes
That you share with all folks
Are banal embarrassments
And, believe me,
A BORE!
You walk towards me,
I seethe!
What a nerve!
I can’t breathe!
“Get Lost!”
I manage to hiss
In front of me you stand, -
then grab hold of my hand!
I’ll hit you!
(I swear I won’t miss!)
You pull me tight to your chest
My heart pounds in my breast
What are you doing?
Good God up above!!
Your lips then meet mine
More potent than wine,
My heart melts –
I have fallen in love!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/25/2016 7:26:00 PM
ANNELIESE, Excellent poem, Awesome flow. Luv ** SKAT **
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Date: 10/3/2011 8:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the "Fine Line" contest Anneliese. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/1/2011 2:58:00 PM
Anneliese,Congrats on your win in Nancy's contest.Enjoyed.
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Date: 10/1/2011 12:26:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of Nancy, Annalise
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Date: 10/1/2011 1:19:00 AM
Oh you fool... just kiddin;) Great poem. congratulations on your HM. Lee
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Date: 9/30/2011 9:04:00 PM
You pegged it! Angry love, oh my, oh my... Thanks so much for the write, Anneliese, and for supporting my contest. Beauty eve, Namaste~N
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Date: 9/27/2011 3:47:00 PM
Oh how we feel about the one's we love. Good poem. I enjoyed
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Date: 9/26/2011 10:32:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you this morning Anneliese. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 9/25/2011 8:20:00 PM
Excellent pertaining to the duality of the mine. Good narration. Jim Chenevert
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Date: 9/25/2011 6:36:00 PM
Good write, Anneliese. Interesting format. Kim
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Date: 9/25/2011 11:09:00 AM
Nice work :)
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Anneliese Bose
Date: 9/25/2011 11:26:00 AM
Thank You, Maddie!