This poem is written with the inspiration of the contest of poet Joe Maverick
I am so enthralled by a verse an impressive and virile style conquered quenching one’s thirst seems hardly emerge however; all songs, stories and ideas being shared are gems and have secrets unparalleled when compared some of the lines titillate the many of my senses some are like music being played in syncopated rhythm words paints the images either in abstruse or in complex pieces undulating emotions rock most of my system torch of learning is a winch to my fervid will power’s stem dazzled by highly metaphorical words as if vitreous rocks radiate like tales of unprecedented events trying to amuse me under the rain viewing it with fire of ceaseless aims through words that substantiate analyzing processes be done like sifting and winnowing of grains a triumph of a glorious scene, a clear topography reigns Written: March 13, 2013 By Leonora Galinta (for occlusion contest) Second Place Contest: Occlusion Judged: 3/18/2013 Sponsor: Poet Joe Maverick
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