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A Vampire's Kiss

The translucent look of his pale flesh His eyes held mine they did enmesh His fingers long and thin, me supine As upon my blood he then did dine That first kiss almost hypnotic From frail frame yet so erotic Mesmerised as teeth pieced vein Subtle, surprising, I felt no pain As my life force poured it left me weak His strength now grew, my future bleak Immortal soul he promised in trade For that first kiss is what he paid In my bed I wait for night I can’t be seen in broad daylight I feed on unwary men Until I am fully nourished again For human blood I daily crave Yet my want is peace inside my grave To suck another life force away I relinquished my death the price I pay. © GG 2.12. 2013 Contest entry Poems from the Vampire

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Date: 3/5/2015 12:14:00 PM
So glad to have come upon this vampire poem, Mandy! It is a delightful write, even in its dark ambience. The want for peace comes on very strongly in the final stanza. // paul
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Date: 3/6/2015 2:18:00 AM
Thanks Paul I enjoyed this one too lol xx
Date: 12/11/2013 4:48:00 PM
I love your take on this subject, and congratulation on your fine win. Warm hugs and smiles, Connie
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Date: 12/9/2013 4:35:00 PM
I love this poem, Mandy! It is dark and sensual, and very well expressed. This was a great entry for the vampire contest! Congratulations on your win!...Thank you for the kind congrats on my poem. I appreciate it very much!
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Date: 12/10/2013 2:42:00 AM
Always a pleasure reading your work Kelly xx
Date: 12/7/2013 4:48:00 AM
Congrats on the win, Mandy
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Date: 12/10/2013 2:43:00 AM
Thanks doc xx
Date: 12/6/2013 4:28:00 PM
congrats on a fine win Mandy
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Date: 12/10/2013 2:43:00 AM
Thanks Joseph xx
Date: 12/2/2013 1:05:00 PM
Another gem, from you golden girl, will be hard to beat, this. You truly do bring life to a somewhat dead subject...you sure do amaze when turning out the poetry you do, you are on a roll Mandy, long May you reign
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Date: 12/2/2013 1:28:00 PM
ha I like that 'bring life to a somewhat dead subject' good one harry thank you xx
Date: 12/2/2013 12:34:00 PM
- Garlic .... !!!!! - A fabulous well written poem about this topic Mandy !! - Two thumbs up for you in the contest ...... no, three!!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/2/2013 1:28:00 PM
no kisses for you if you are on the garlic lol thanks luv xx
Date: 12/2/2013 9:37:00 AM
great write Mandy...good luck in the contest...hugs
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Date: 12/2/2013 1:29:00 PM
Thanks joseph xx
Date: 12/2/2013 9:06:00 AM
Fantastic take on the contest, Mandy
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Date: 12/2/2013 1:29:00 PM
Thanks Ram much appreciated xx

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