Nette Onclaud Poet Rhyme

A Valentie Wedding

This parchment holds your grip so right
as tears of joy behold our days,
and while the moon imprints this flight
when a splendor of time replays
beguiling nightfall's song, mid-air...
unconditional I declare
accepting you as is, so rare,
till kisses waltz in gentle sways.

For better or worse etched on sky
this promise of life I cherish;
that come fire and rain, we shall try
for love's seasons not to perish,
since years ahead has found true place...
Dearest beloved, I embrace
sweet thrill of life made from God’s grace;
Forever is ours to relish.


2/ 02/2016
Contest of Mystic Rose
A VALENTINE POEM OF YOUR CHOICE OLD OR NEW

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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl August 17, 2014 at 2:48 AM Hi nette, lovely,,,congratulations xx

Faye Gibson August 16, 2014 at 5:01 PM Really beautiful, Nette. "Till kisses waltz in gentle sways." Very nice. Congratulations.

John Lawless August 16, 2014 at 2:47 PM Congrats on the win Nette, a rather unique take on the theme.

Jan Allison August 16, 2014 at 2:26 PM dropping back with my congratulations:-) hugs jan xx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma August 16, 2014 at 1:48 PM Back wid huge congrats on ur awesome win Nette!

Cecilia Macfarlane July 30, 2014 at 3:36 PM Wow Nette....finding one's true place is what we all strive for and you expressed this so beautifully here. Hugs

Harry Horsman July 27, 2014 at 9:50 AM What can one say to this, a wondrous sentiment from a mind a personaity so sincere, so human, so tender...

Ravi Sathasivam July 27, 2014 at 1:56 AM Excellent. Beautiful poem. Enjoyed. Tfs

Kash Poet July 26, 2014 at 3:06 PM Wonderful poem here Nette!Enjoyed the read.

Kelly Deschler July 26, 2014 at 1:14 AM Finding someone who will accept us as is, is finding true love.... These tender words were so beautifully written and expressed, Nette! An excellent poem!.... This should do very well in Dan's contest. Good luck to you!

Sara Kendrick July 25, 2014 at 6:45 PM Great work..Very expressive ....."that come fire and rain, we shall try for love's seasons not to perish"...We all hope that it will last when we find that special person some do and some don't..Sara

Manny Paras July 25, 2014 at 6:39 PM You really excel here! God has made you who you are, and it needs no changing! Your poetry is like a love's soothing tune, Nette. A compliment to be mentioned in your last contest. Thanks a lot!

Amelie Mara July 25, 2014 at 1:22 PM Breathless! Who wouldn't want to be loved for just being who she really is? This radiant piece made me teary-eyed, Nette. Also, I'm glad my wayra poem made it. Thank you!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 25, 2014 at 8:56 AM Poetry to perfection Nette ! U hv an exceptional ability to play wid words my dear!

Anne-Lise Andresen July 25, 2014 at 7:06 AM - A beautiful poem, Nette - A promise is given - will never be broken - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison July 25, 2014 at 5:35 AM Simply stunning Nette - never lose your grip when you find the right one:-) Hugs Jan xx

Jerry T Curtis July 25, 2014 at 5:30 AM Another Great Nette, beautifully done :)