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A vacant mind in blooming garden

Ashy Prinia pair
Flitted across my garden
Catching something here and there

Yellow Portulaca flowers looked brighter
Once they saw this
Ashy Prinia pair

A lone lotus 
Swayed as the gentle birds
Flitted across my garden

I wondered how
They stayed happy while
Catching something here and there

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Date: 6/21/2024 3:50:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Very nicely penned
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Date: 6/21/2024 8:47:00 PM
Thank you so much dear poet. I am grateful for the placement, means so much to me. Cheers.

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