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A Universal Utopia

A Universal Utopia thatched by a dream of future heaven on this world After a long journey just immature waiting to be matured Piercing with voiceless ringing through the particles of time Days are peeping in to the afar blessings which will fall Seeds of perfection gradually planting to bring all perfections by broadening the hatch way in between the world and heaven Sponsored by: SKAT A For Premiere Contest number 2 - Poetry Contest

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Seosamh De Burca

Date: 7/25/2016 7:57:00 AM

Congrats on your wonderful poem win. This is a lovely poem.

Bl Devnath
Date: 7/25/2016 12:28:00 PM

Thanks my lovely friend for your wishes. Loved always, bl

Jan Allison

Date: 7/21/2016 3:36:00 PM

Beautiful write with a positive message congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Bl Devnath
Date: 7/22/2016 9:32:00 AM

Thanks my lovely smiling friend for your wishes. Loved always, bl

Sara Chansarkar

Date: 7/21/2016 1:52:00 PM

Lovely poem BL,congratulations!

Bl Devnath
Date: 7/22/2016 9:32:00 AM

Thanks my lovely smiling friend for your wishes. Loved always, bl

Skat A

Date: 7/21/2016 1:33:00 PM

BL, Congrats on your awesome win. Thank you for supporting my second Premiere contest. Stop by my latest blog "The Perfect One." Forever **SKAT**

Bl Devnath
Date: 7/22/2016 9:31:00 AM

Thanks my lovely smiling friend for your wishes. Loved always, bl

Just James

Date: 7/21/2016 1:13:00 PM

Congratulations BL great win!

Bl Devnath
Date: 7/22/2016 9:30:00 AM

Thanks my lovely genius friend for your wishes. Loved always, bl

Sunita U.D Palawon

Date: 7/21/2016 10:56:00 AM

This is a wonderful poem. Congrats on your win. :)

Bl Devnath
Date: 7/21/2016 11:00:00 AM

Thanks my lovely friend for your beautiful wishes. Loved always, bl

Hansteven Selfa

Date: 7/21/2016 10:12:00 AM

Such beautiful write BL! I salute you! Congratulations and keep on writing more. You are indeed an inspiration! ;)

Bl Devnath
Date: 7/21/2016 11:01:00 AM

My lovely friend thanks a lot from my small heart for giving me honor and wishes both. You are also an inspiration too. Loved always, bl

Kelly Deschler

Date: 11/11/2013 6:30:00 PM

A wonderful poem with a positive message! Beautifully written! Congratulations on your win!...Thank you for the kind congrats on my poem. I appreciate it very much!

Bl Devnath
Date: 11/11/2013 8:19:00 PM

Thanks a lot to you too. Loved always, bl