Bl Devnath Poet Prose Poetry

A Universal Utopia

A Universal Utopia thatched by 
                                a dream of future heaven on this world
                     After a long journey just immature waiting to be matured
                    Piercing with voiceless ringing through the particles of time 
                        Days are peeping in to the afar blessings which will fall
                    Seeds of perfection gradually planting to bring all perfections
                  by broadening the hatch way in between the world and heaven


                  Sponsored by: SKAT A
                  For Premiere Contest number 2 - Poetry Contest

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Seosamh De Burca July 25, 2016 at 7:57 AM Congrats on your wonderful poem win. This is a lovely poem. Bl Devnath July 25, 2016 at 12:28 PM Thanks my lovely friend for your wishes. Loved always, bl

Jan Allison July 21, 2016 at 3:36 PM Beautiful write with a positive message congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Bl Devnath July 22, 2016 at 9:32 AM Thanks my lovely smiling friend for your wishes. Loved always, bl

Sara Chansarkar July 21, 2016 at 1:52 PM Lovely poem BL,congratulations! Bl Devnath July 22, 2016 at 9:32 AM Thanks my lovely smiling friend for your wishes. Loved always, bl

Skat A July 21, 2016 at 1:33 PM BL, Congrats on your awesome win. Thank you for supporting my second Premiere contest. Stop by my latest blog "The Perfect One." Forever **SKAT** Bl Devnath July 22, 2016 at 9:31 AM Thanks my lovely smiling friend for your wishes. Loved always, bl

Just James July 21, 2016 at 1:13 PM Congratulations BL great win! Bl Devnath July 22, 2016 at 9:30 AM Thanks my lovely genius friend for your wishes. Loved always, bl

Sunita U.D Palawon July 21, 2016 at 10:56 AM This is a wonderful poem. Congrats on your win. :) Bl Devnath July 21, 2016 at 11:00 AM Thanks my lovely friend for your beautiful wishes. Loved always, bl

Hansteven Selfa July 21, 2016 at 10:12 AM Such beautiful write BL! I salute you! Congratulations and keep on writing more. You are indeed an inspiration! ;) Bl Devnath July 21, 2016 at 11:01 AM My lovely friend thanks a lot from my small heart for giving me honor and wishes both. You are also an inspiration too. Loved always, bl

Kelly Deschler November 11, 2013 at 6:30 PM A wonderful poem with a positive message! Beautifully written! Congratulations on your win!...Thank you for the kind congrats on my poem. I appreciate it very much! Bl Devnath November 11, 2013 at 8:19 PM Thanks a lot to you too. Loved always, bl

Dr.Ram Mehta November 11, 2013 at 4:14 AM Congratulations on the win, Devnath Bl Devnath November 11, 2013 at 6:32 AM Many thanks for your wishes. Loved always, bl

Karen Anglesey November 10, 2013 at 10:40 PM Very lovely thoughts pouring out here. Hoping for a heaven on earth. Congrats on the win :) Bl Devnath November 10, 2013 at 11:25 PM Many thanks for your wishes. Loved always, bl

Skat A November 10, 2013 at 9:24 PM BL ... Congratulations, thanks for the support..... ~SKAT~ LOVE Bl Devnath November 10, 2013 at 11:25 PM Many thanks for your wishes. Loved always, bl

Harry Horsman September 19, 2013 at 4:30 AM Oh such faith, wonderful to read this poetry, Bl Devnath September 19, 2013 at 9:48 AM Thanks my sweet friend for your comment. Loved always, bl

Nette Onclaud September 18, 2013 at 1:41 PM bridging the gap towards collective onsciousness,,bl.. fine work!..:) huggs Bl Devnath September 18, 2013 at 2:18 PM Many thanks my friend for your comment. Loved always, bl