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A Universal Performance

I hear the moon, breathing out her light; I breathe it in. Inundated with music of electric dancing stars; I want to dance and sing. The universal concert, soothing my ears.

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Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 12/16/2018 11:21:00 AM

A gripping poetic performance! Unique imagery! A wonderful concert! An adept poet! A great pleasure to see, listen and rejoice in! Best regards M. L. Kiser.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 12/16/2018 11:56:00 AM

The heavens are a beauty. I can imagine the planets spinning out harmonies, continuously. Their vibration soothes my tired senses and Moon's light shines on hope. Thank you so much for your generous observations.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/15/2018 9:20:00 PM

Wonderful imagery. Let us dance and sing the night away!! Excellent poesy! :) gw

M. L. Kiser
Date: 12/16/2018 7:37:00 AM

Suits me! Your comments are always appreciated, Gershon; I am glad it put you in a singing and dancing mood. All the best.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/15/2018 9:24:00 AM

Heartfelt, and telling; I love this moon communication you have going in this poem.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 12/15/2018 6:03:00 PM

Somehow I'm just awed by all of nature; the moon is more than just a planet or rock in space; it has its own magic. Where the sun seems to rage, the moon is a tender being with a softer glow. Glad you enjoyed it and thanks.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/15/2018 8:04:00 AM

Enjoyed the universal concert..well written MLK.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 12/15/2018 8:17:00 AM

Thanks so much, Vijay; I am glad you thought so.