A Universal Performance

I hear the moon, breathing out her light; I breathe it in. Inundated with music of electric dancing stars; I want to dance and sing. The universal concert, soothing my ears.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Riabi Dziri Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 11:21 AM
A gripping poetic performance! Unique imagery! A wonderful concert! An adept poet! A great pleasure to see, listen and rejoice in! Best regards M. L. Kiser.
Kiser Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 11:56 AM
The heavens are a beauty. I can imagine the planets spinning out harmonies, continuously. Their vibration soothes my tired senses and Moon's light shines on hope. Thank you so much for your generous observations.
Wolf Avatar
December 15, 2018 at 9:20 PM
Wonderful imagery. Let us dance and sing the night away!! Excellent poesy! :) gw
Kiser Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 7:37 AM
Suits me! Your comments are always appreciated, Gershon; I am glad it put you in a singing and dancing mood. All the best.
Krutsinger Avatar
December 15, 2018 at 9:24 AM
Heartfelt, and telling; I love this moon communication you have going in this poem.
Kiser Avatar
December 15, 2018 at 6:03 PM
Somehow I'm just awed by all of nature; the moon is more than just a planet or rock in space; it has its own magic. Where the sun seems to rage, the moon is a tender being with a softer glow. Glad you enjoyed it and thanks.
Pandit Avatar
December 15, 2018 at 8:04 AM
Enjoyed the universal concert..well written MLK.
Kiser Avatar
December 15, 2018 at 8:17 AM
Thanks so much, Vijay; I am glad you thought so.
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