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A United Nation

I long to live in a world where love and peace reign. Where all will know true freedom no matter what. Where homelessness cease to exist, all over the land. Where folk embrace their fellow man to become a united force. Where folk that share different views meet in the middle, So they could sit down eye to eye and reach a common goal. Where folk will show kindness to others no matter their race, gender, age, political affiliation, or religion. Where folk can see each other as their brother from another mother. We must remove the stumbling blocks of discord so healing can take place And realize we're a broken people, cry out to God as well fall on our face. *This may not cut it, but the awesome contest inspired me to enter. Contest: What Do You Want Sponsor: Richard Lamoureux 03/09/2021

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Date: 3/11/2021 11:30:00 PM
Thank goodness many people I know already do this - "Where folk will show kindness to others no matter their race, gender, age, political affiliation, or religion."
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Date: 3/10/2021 3:05:00 PM
Hello alexis Y. I would like to live in a world like that being peaceful. Enjoy your evening my friend.
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Date: 3/10/2021 10:57:00 AM
We all believe TV has helped us to quickly and accurately make decisions about - actors! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 3/9/2021 11:29:00 PM
An utopian poem. Hard to achieve in this turmoil world. But we always hope.
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Date: 3/9/2021 9:05:00 PM
I like the last line especially. Sometimes it takes a horrible fall on one's face, before change happens. :) gw
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Date: 3/9/2021 3:12:00 PM
We are all broken children and only god can give us the cure to mend our hearts and our world. Thank you for sharing such powerful words today dear Alexis
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Date: 3/9/2021 2:32:00 PM
Isn't it ironic, Alexis, that a nation that calls itself united is so far apart right now? I completely concur with your wants.
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Date: 3/9/2021 12:38:00 PM
Much harmony in this write my friend. May the world read your poem and live in its meaning.
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Date: 3/9/2021 11:30:00 AM
Excellent. Hope you win. God Bless, JB
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Date: 3/9/2021 11:13:00 AM
excellent summary of what you want in this world. Very well done, Alexis.
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Date: 3/9/2021 11:10:00 AM
An ideal world Alexis, we live in hope that one day that dream will come true. Good luck in the contest Tom
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