Patri Venkata Ramana Poet Monoku

A Twist of Fate Hlm

black clouds in the blue
started raining cats and dogs
submerging the roads

A man was walking in rain queerly.
Mocking at running men unfairly
An umbrella he had.
But ill-luck made him sad.
Wind upturned it; he was drenched merely.

fate does strange twists; no remedies for; one should stop giving oneself airs.



Charlie Hai-Lim-Ku Poetry Contest
Monoku poetry form only.
Sponsored by: Charles Messina 
Date:31-01-2021.
Placed : 2nd

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Charles Messina March 16, 2022 at 7:35 PM Dear Patri, sorry it took so long to comment on this fun write (loved the limerick) You did well combining these forms...Belated Congrats on your win in my contest! Blessings...Charlie Patri Venkata Ramana March 17, 2022 at 6:23 PM Thank you so much for the compliments.

Sara Kendrick March 13, 2022 at 4:26 AM I have read your winning work and was delighted that it is on the winners' list. Way to go. Congrats. Sara Patri Venkata Ramana March 13, 2022 at 9:40 AM Thank you so much for reading my poem. Very glad for the compliments.

Christuraj Alex March 11, 2022 at 5:00 AM Winds upturning the umbrella. Happens during every monsoon. Beautifully written. Congratulations! Patri Venkata Ramana March 13, 2022 at 9:38 AM Thank you so much for the best compliments.