A Twinkle In the Sky

Are we more than just a twinkle in the sky
     More than a reflection of someone’s eye
Where to find meaning, an endless pursuit
     With so many thoughts, my mind can’t compute

Perhaps it’s best not to struggle in vain
     For what we don’t know, causing us pain
To accept and be grateful that we’re here today
     Let such contemplation just dwindle away
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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June 15, 2017 at 7:40 PM
Pretty profound, Mike. The struggle to overcome vanity is a lifelong endeavor. In the end, isn't that what it all boils down to, Vanity. To think that our life mattered. This poem could spark a real good philosophical debate.
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June 15, 2017 at 8:51 PM
Thank you Daniel, I do often think about that
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June 15, 2017 at 12:53 PM
Back to say, I would like to save it as a favorite. :)
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June 15, 2017 at 2:08 PM
Thanks so much Heidi
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June 15, 2017 at 12:52 PM
This is great Mike. It is so easy to analyze and get wrapped up in thoughts of unanswered questions. You could not have said it better regarding acceptance and gratitude which helps us live in the moment . Well done :)
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