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A Twinkle In the Night

feels like magic, floating in the air, all my pain just seem to drift away. caught up by the beauty of your smile there just doesnt seem for words. its dangerous i know , a moment longed for all your lifetime seems to slow down as soft music of the wind tingles across your face we're both too afraid to reveal our hearts. lost in your trance those words travel across my mind, 'love, you cant hurry it, it's like a drug you get addicted or you lose , you don't play by it's rules and you will win". huh? caught by surprise i've heard those before..... as i continu steering at those big, dazzling, greyish eyes i shiver with delight my goodness a twinkle in the night

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Date: 5/18/2011 1:36:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed your creative write tonight.. hope u have fun on P.S. as u share with luv.. check out our free contests... good luck with luv..
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Date: 5/18/2011 12:53:00 PM
Tanisha-What country are u from...it's always fun to know so we can all learn from eachother. Welcome- enjoy your time spent here..I am actually learning to write poetry since January..I think I enjoy reading and commenting more than writing these days. A Twinkle in the Night shows your passion. Hearts are tender and scared aren't they? Best to you. Gwendolen
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Tanisha Villiers
Date: 5/18/2011 1:26:00 PM
hi Gwendolen. I'm from st lucia.thanks I am already enjoying my time here. thanks again
Date: 5/18/2011 12:16:00 PM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Tanisha. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 5/18/2011 11:53:00 AM
I am spending my morning reading wonderful poetry and enjoying it so much. I am so impressed with the poems I have read so far this morning. I am happy yours was among them Tanisha. Love, Carol
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Tanisha Villiers
Date: 5/18/2011 11:58:00 AM
thank you so very much. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Book: Shattered Sighs