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A Tsunami

her grief comes in waves
a tsunami immersed her
drags pain from her soul

Written 1st February 2020

Contest Strand Select C
Sponsor Brian Strand
2nd Place

Copyright © Ann Gilmour | Year Posted 2020

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February 13, 2020 at 7:46 PM

"a tsunami" such an appropriate term, Ann. Well done.

February 14, 2020 at 12:06 PM

That is exactly how it felt Line, both for my husband and my son... With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Panagiota Romios

February 6, 2020 at 4:42 PM

Great one, Ann. And loving wishes for a win Panagiota xx

February 8, 2020 at 3:14 AM

Bless you my friend, with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Demetrios Trifiatis

February 1, 2020 at 3:16 PM

Powerful imagery that the soul cannot withstand ! Great Senryu

February 1, 2020 at 4:36 PM

Yes Demetrios you are so right. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

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