A Trip To the Bird Sanctuary

In the midst of grass land,
there lie some cute white band.
They fly round here and there,
White cranes grin with their pair

Glimpse of black birds greet me.
"New Birds"?Face shines with glee.
"No...We are your old friends"
Crows cried, ours will not end!

A chase scene caught my eyes.
Two big birds,fought like guys.
Oh! a life and death fight?
"Warm up fight" said the kite.

Wow!Here comes my dream bird,
with white smooth skin, like curd
See the hues on its tail,
shades of fresh red but pale

Can you guess its sweet name?
A stork, a true good fame.
Some great things, these birds share,
that we all need to care.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Talbot Avatar
February 22, 2018 at 3:17 AM
Do I detect a twitchers eye? You didn't miss much either, on the ground or in the sky. I watch birds nigh on every day, feeding on my bird table, not quite the same like as out in the field come sun or rain. Loved virtual trip, thanks for sharing... Mick PS Sorry nearly forgot, Congratulations on your win, well done!
Callus Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 1:36 PM
A delightful trip described in lovely words, Supraja. I've been to bird sanctuaries, and each has been an enjoyable experience. ~ Regards // paul
Payton Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 5:15 PM
I was guessing, rude much lol. Great job, Supraja.
Roper Avatar
February 11, 2018 at 8:29 PM
Back with congratulations on your winning write, Supraja :) Hugs Eve
Dietrich Avatar
February 10, 2018 at 6:39 PM
what a treat to see all those birds in their element! And I see it's a win. In which contest? Congratulations.
Kannan Avatar
February 11, 2018 at 7:19 AM
Thank you so much.... SO's 120 words contest...
Gauthier Avatar
February 10, 2018 at 10:07 AM
Congrats on your win, Supraja.
Kannan Avatar
February 11, 2018 at 7:18 AM
Thank you so much...
Y. Avatar
February 10, 2018 at 10:04 AM
Congratulations on your winning write:-) Alexis
Kannan Avatar
February 11, 2018 at 7:16 AM
Thank you so much...
One Avatar
February 10, 2018 at 9:13 AM
Lovely visit Supraja.. Congratualtions on your placement in the contest
Kannan Avatar
February 11, 2018 at 7:12 AM
Thank you so much So....
Roper Avatar
February 9, 2018 at 11:56 AM
Nicely done, Supraja, great story, nice flow, great rhyme... luck in the contest.
Kannan Avatar
February 10, 2018 at 4:48 AM
Thank you for the correction Eve...I appreciate it... I will consider that...
Trifiatis Avatar
February 9, 2018 at 7:16 AM
Joyous optimistic poem, excellent rhyme dearest,Supraja!
Kannan Avatar
February 22, 2018 at 4:31 AM
Kannan Avatar
February 11, 2018 at 7:16 AM
Thank you so much...
Pandit Avatar
February 8, 2018 at 12:55 PM
Well written theme--you did great with your rhymes and the flow..best for a win.
Kannan Avatar
February 11, 2018 at 7:12 AM
Thank you so much...
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