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A Trip To the Bird Sanctuary

In the midst of grass land, there lie some cute white band. They fly round here and there, White cranes grin with their pair Glimpse of black birds greet me. "New Birds"?Face shines with glee. "No...We are your old friends" Crows cried, ours will not end! A chase scene caught my eyes. Two big birds,fought like guys. Oh! a life and death fight? "Warm up fight" said the kite. Wow!Here comes my dream bird, with white smooth skin, like curd See the hues on its tail, shades of fresh red but pale Can you guess its sweet name? A stork, a true good fame. Some great things, these birds share, that we all need to care.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 2/22/2018 3:17:00 AM
Do I detect a twitchers eye? You didn't miss much either, on the ground or in the sky. I watch birds nigh on every day, feeding on my bird table, not quite the same like as out in the field come sun or rain. Loved virtual trip, thanks for sharing... Mick PS Sorry nearly forgot, Congratulations on your win, well done!
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Date: 2/18/2018 1:36:00 PM
A delightful trip described in lovely words, Supraja. I've been to bird sanctuaries, and each has been an enjoyable experience. ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 2/14/2018 5:15:00 PM
I was guessing, rude much lol. Great job, Supraja.
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Date: 2/11/2018 8:29:00 PM
Back with congratulations on your winning write, Supraja :) Hugs Eve
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Date: 2/10/2018 6:39:00 PM
what a treat to see all those birds in their element! And I see it's a win. In which contest? Congratulations.
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Supraja Kannan
Date: 2/11/2018 7:19:00 AM
Thank you so much.... SO's 120 words contest...
Date: 2/10/2018 10:07:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Supraja.
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Date: 2/11/2018 7:18:00 AM
Thank you so much...
Date: 2/10/2018 10:04:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning write:-) Alexis
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Supraja Kannan
Date: 2/11/2018 7:16:00 AM
Thank you so much...
Date: 2/10/2018 9:13:00 AM
Lovely visit Supraja.. Congratualtions on your placement in the contest
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Supraja Kannan
Date: 2/11/2018 7:12:00 AM
Thank you so much So....
Date: 2/9/2018 11:56:00 AM
Nicely done, Supraja, great story, nice flow, great rhyme... luck in the contest.
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Supraja Kannan
Date: 2/10/2018 4:48:00 AM
Thank you for the correction Eve...I appreciate it... I will consider that...
Date: 2/9/2018 7:16:00 AM
Joyous optimistic poem, excellent rhyme dearest,Supraja!
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Supraja Kannan
Date: 2/22/2018 4:31:00 AM
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Supraja Kannan
Date: 2/11/2018 7:16:00 AM
Thank you so much...
Date: 2/8/2018 12:55:00 PM
Well written theme--you did great with your rhymes and the flow..best for a win.
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Date: 2/11/2018 7:12:00 AM
Thank you so much...

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