A Tribute To Those Who Serve

I was commissioned to write this for my brother's church in
New Castle, Indiana.   On the 10th anniversary of 9/11 they
will conduct a service to honor those who were directly
involved in the tragedy in NYC and  also to honor those who serve
the New Castle community 24/365.  It will be copied on parchment
and a copy will be given to each service provider.

On this Tenth Anniversary of Nine Eleven we gather to give sincere thanksgiving,
For those brave men and women who served us that day, the fallen and the living.
They placed service above self to aid their neighbors, community and nation.
Some sacrified all on The Altar of Honor for their friends without reservation!

We also gather to pay tribute to those who serve our own community each day.
So much, so very much we owe each of them - we can never begin to repay,
They quietly serve us in so many ways with proficiency and dedication.
Their devoted families also serve, faithfully supporting their hero's vocation!

We honor the Indiana State Patrol who deserve our respect and admiration,
For maintaining safe passage and keeping traffic flowing, easing our frustration!
We praise the Sheriff and his deputies for keeping things well under control,
And responding to our frantic calls for aid anytime during their daily patrol!

We are blessed with a Chief of Police and his folks upon whom we can reply.
They are true professionals and are quick to respond when things go awry!
Our wonderful firefighters and paramedics serve us with compassionate care.
None can compare to these valiant souls who are ever ready and willing to share!

We laud our magnificent military who our freedoms have so gallantly preserved!
We cherish our National Guard, reservists and veterans who honorably served!
One day upon the brow of each of these elect He'll bestow a royal crown,
Saying, "You, my friend, have served Me and My people with great renown!"

Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 8/16/2011 4:17:00 AM
A very touching dedication and you should feel proud when it is read aloud in your hometown. How kind of them to hold this memorial service and how generous of you to point to all the good people who serve your community so well. In less than a month we will reach the anniversary of the worst catastrophy caused by terrorists on our nation. A very powerful poem, Bob, and I wish I could hear them read it aloud. Hope you will be present to read it yourself. Love and blessings, Carolyn
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Date: 8/15/2011 11:08:00 AM
ahhh, a serious and deep song from you is a real treat, robert... a finely-sewn piece on valor; beautiful! :) hugggs, nette
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Date: 8/14/2011 8:52:00 PM
Dear Bob, Such a wonderful tribute to those who died that awful day. I don't think those images will ever leave my mind - just apalling and the terror the families must have gone through. You do a marvellous job on these military verses always. Luv, Eizabeth.
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Date: 8/14/2011 7:19:00 PM
Great tribute to the men and women of service..Enjoyed reading this one..I read something about something happening in Indiana recently..Sara
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Date: 8/13/2011 7:51:00 PM
stunning spectacular write Bob.. so intense a tribute to all who serve communities and countries luv.. now that the straw poll is final maybe some good leadership will once again prevail to build up our USA to make all those who serve more proud luv..
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Date: 8/13/2011 7:37:00 PM
very apt tributes and dedication to the soldiers from a soldier, Bob
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Date: 8/13/2011 6:00:00 PM
There are so many who serve and protect. They deserve our respect. Elegantly written.
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Date: 8/13/2011 5:12:00 PM
Amen to that Sir Robert don't think anyone will disagree...Great write...with love...old Jack
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Date: 8/13/2011 4:48:00 PM
Well said concerning so many good people - both alive and otherwise. God bless them each and every one. Thanks for sharing. Terrell Martin
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