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A Trek Walk Through the Snow

I wore these shoes before
And as I walk across floor
The rushing winds shakes the door
As winter colds blows it's snow
Tornadic realms comes and buffers
Throwing star like frozen ice toppings
Covering the entire population
Now the time to come shut the doors and windows 
I walk in the mist of the snow storm
No one knows my whereabouts
I am lost they too are blinded by the storm
Tornadic realms comes and buffers
Entrapped by the bitterness we suffer
And as I walk across floor
I wore these shoes before
Walking, stumbling, sliding trekking through the snow


03/6/18
©2018
For Contest: MARCH 18 PREMIERE CONTEST,ANY FORM OR NONE,ANY THEME,UP TO A MAX OF 20 lines
SPONSORED BY:  Brian Strand

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 3/12/2018 10:38:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this poem, James, with its deep imagery and metaphors. Congratulations on your win. Sandra
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Date: 3/11/2018 6:56:00 PM
An intriguing poem James of compelling content and expressive imagery.. Congratulations on your wonderful win!
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Date: 3/11/2018 6:52:00 PM
Congrats on your win, James.
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