A Tree

A tree grows from the ground up Grows tall with a little luck It leans on the sunshine, and soaks up the rain It sheds its clothes, then dresses for the Spring!

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Just That Archaic Poet

Date: 9/12/2013 3:54:00 PM

I also love the simplistic way you wrote this; very straightforward and I love the brevity. Great job! :)

Johnny Rhinem

Date: 8/11/2013 4:06:00 PM

I Do Believe That Everything Breathes Amid One Truth Or Another ? We In Faith Tempered Of A Child's Can Find Ourselves This Spirit Twined With Most All Amid Creation; Be It Trees Rivers Skies Birds Butterflies All In All And All Of Life, Dear Precious Lucinda Price ~ Pretty Poe And Congratulations Upon Your Good Fortunes In Re Another Literary Agent. Also, Thank You Once More For Your Kind Visit, Love, John