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A Touch of Ocean Breeze

What if there was a passage way down to the ocean

Tucked away within the wall an eroded cave

Cool breeze always in motion as azure, Turquoise Ocean  swirls

Breathing in deep reflecting a show of rainbow mist as waves break the cliff face


A cave perfect for a dining room full of stunning unremarkable furnishings

White cotton linens, accent with fresh-cut blooms, and small center table lamps

Pale turquoise ribbon fastening place settings and napkins

Dinnerware and dishes embossed shells and starfish dusted in sandy bronze

Swim in a sea of pale turquoise


Providing guest  with genuine friendly, welcoming staff

Chef de cuisine creating a gourmet menu of incredibly fresh ocean delicacies

I'd call it " A Touch of Ocean Breeze"

Prices that everyone can afford;


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          Varity of wines  

                So much more 

Pleasant and accommodating

You won’t be disappointed


9/28/2016

My imaginary restaurant - Poetry Contest 

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Neumann Avatar
October 6, 2016 at 4:27 AM
Fantastic, congratulations, Kai
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 5, 2016 at 5:13 PM
Your poem is so inventive Eve! I was very impressed. I loved your entry and I would've placed it a top winner. Including your fish shape was genius! Congratulations on your win! ; ) 7
Roper Avatar
October 5, 2016 at 5:28 PM
thank you, Connie, I love you for your wonderful inspiring comment. Hugs
Black Avatar
October 4, 2016 at 6:08 AM
Well, Eve this is just perfect. I like this restaurant a lot. The scene you have described is truely magnificent. Wow...... You have chosen great domain for this restaurant. Nice work. All the best and congratulation.
Haight Avatar
October 3, 2016 at 7:38 PM
Back to congratulate you on your fine placement in the contest, Eve. Hugs, Sandra
Roper Avatar
October 3, 2016 at 8:12 PM
Thank you, Sandra :-) Hugs
Warrior Avatar
October 3, 2016 at 10:41 AM
Congrats!!! my friend...let's dine lol...god bless...^WW^
Roper Avatar
October 3, 2016 at 8:11 PM
Thank you, ^WW^ Hugs :-)
Y. Avatar
October 3, 2016 at 10:36 AM
Hi Eve, Wouldn't that be something? A passageway down to the ocean. This restaurant sounds mesmerizing and alluring. And the foods sounds fantastic . Congratulations on your second place win. It was well deserved :-) Alexis
Roper Avatar
October 3, 2016 at 8:10 PM
Thank you, Alexis :-) Hugs
Nayak Avatar
October 3, 2016 at 8:31 AM
Congratulations on your placement Eve, lovely write! Sounds like a wonderland in the oceans, wish to pay a visit here! fabulous!!enjoyed , love, Anu:)
Roper Avatar
October 3, 2016 at 8:09 PM
Thank you, Anulaxmi :-) Hugs
May Avatar
October 3, 2016 at 8:18 AM
Congrats on a fine win Eve
Roper Avatar
October 3, 2016 at 8:08 PM
Thank you, Joseph :-) Hugs
Turner Avatar
October 3, 2016 at 8:16 AM
Back to say congratulations, Mrs. Eve, on your placement. Got any leftovers?
Roper Avatar
October 3, 2016 at 8:07 PM
Thank you Daniel :-) Hugs
Scars Avatar
October 3, 2016 at 7:34 AM
love the shape sweet Eve! congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
Roper Avatar
October 3, 2016 at 8:06 PM
Thank you, Laura Hugs
May Avatar
October 1, 2016 at 5:54 AM
Your vision for this restaurant is brilliant Eve...Great write...
Roper Avatar
October 3, 2016 at 8:05 PM
Thank you, Joseph :-) Hugs
Daniel Avatar
October 1, 2016 at 3:51 AM
Wow, love your restaurant, Eve:) this one will definitely win:)
Roper Avatar
October 3, 2016 at 8:04 PM
Thank you, Jo :-) Hugs
Haight Avatar
September 29, 2016 at 7:11 PM
Oh, Eve, I adore your restaurant! How wonderful to be secluded with the beautiful ocean in this creative place to eat and relax. I believe this will be high on the winner's list! Hugs, Sandra
Roper Avatar
September 29, 2016 at 9:33 PM
Thank you so very much, Sandra, for the inspirational complement :-) Hugs
Gupta Avatar
September 29, 2016 at 7:50 AM
Wonderful ... Metaphorical first two stanzas took me by surprise ...
Roper Avatar
September 29, 2016 at 9:37 PM
Thank you, Probir:-) Hugs Eve
Onclaud Avatar
September 29, 2016 at 6:37 AM
ohh, i would love to hang around this resto, eve... such a vivid, sumptuous piece!..huggs
Roper Avatar
September 29, 2016 at 9:35 PM
Thank you, Nette, Hugs
Warrior Avatar
September 28, 2016 at 11:01 PM
I'm not much for seafood...but I'll try your under the sea restaurant Eve....sounds like a great hide away...are there any mermaids ? lol...^WW^
Roper Avatar
September 28, 2016 at 11:46 PM
the mermaids are the staff .... Thank you , ^WW^ , I'm allergic to shell fish a variety of fish. : ) Hugs Eve
Turner Avatar
September 28, 2016 at 9:45 PM
Reserve me a table Mrs Eve. I'll be having some of that seafood. I think I'm going to go raid the fridge. The ocean would be the perfect place for this restaurant.
Roper Avatar
September 28, 2016 at 10:35 PM
I will do so,, I love the ocean and the coast line they are just breath taking... :) Hugs Eve
Scars Avatar
September 28, 2016 at 7:00 PM
yummmmy Eve! Loved this one :) Good luck lovely Eve :)-luloo
Roper Avatar
September 28, 2016 at 10:36 PM
Thank you, Laura, for all your inspiring writes of praise :) Hugs Eve
Smith Avatar
September 28, 2016 at 6:48 PM
Oh now I'm hungry. Can I get a reservation at 8.
Roper Avatar
September 28, 2016 at 6:58 PM
Yes you may :)
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