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A Total Surprise

Sometimes in life there’s a total surprise That’s so unexpected you have to surmise What’s happening right there in front of your eyes Is not quite as real as it seems. It’s something you’ve hoped for but didn’t expect, For out of the blue you would never suspect A stranger to reach out and help to inject Reality into your dreams. The ups and the downs that we face every day In the light of good news could start fading away. We can’t count on good luck, but at times it just may Be a factor in fate’s cryptic schemes.

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Date: 4/13/2022 11:21:00 AM
Now you know why it is called, LADY Luck! Aloha!
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Date: 4/12/2022 7:41:00 PM
Today good surprise -- Tomorrow, good sunrise! :) gw
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Date: 4/12/2022 3:56:00 PM
Hello Ilene, this a lovely poem. I like the way the words flow. Hugs.
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Date: 4/12/2022 2:24:00 PM
Love this poem, Ilene, especially the tail-rhymes.
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