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A Torrential Downpour

Cascading in a rush With a vociferous gush Big drops on the crown Poured steadfastly down Amidst lightening and storm And a loud thunderous sound Playful restless With a mischievous step Banging at the door Of her little head A frenzied lot Of deafening knocks Raring roaring Persistent, non stop... Deftly she caught some Coalesced them into a poem. Earlier submitted for Name of the contest: CREATE AN IDIOM Now submitting for A natural metaphor Date Jan 20 2017 Writers note This poem, ( title changed) incidently my first submission at poetry soup last year, signifies the surge of words, a metaphoric downpour engulfing the mind of a poet , deafening in their intensity.The poet's creative skills weave out a poem from this divine gift, rapping at the doors.

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Date: 8/3/2016 2:23:00 PM
Sushma, congrats on your placement in the contest! :)-luloo
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Sushma A. Singh
Date: 8/10/2016 5:43:00 AM
Thanks
Date: 8/3/2016 8:27:00 AM
This is lovely Sushma, congratulations!
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Sushma A. Singh
Date: 8/3/2016 10:07:00 AM
Thanks, Sara!
Date: 8/3/2016 7:47:00 AM
Excellent work on your poem – nicely written to form. Your idiom is strong and it flowed perfectly in your work. Congrats on your 7th place win in the Create an Idiom contest!
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Sushma A. Singh
Date: 8/3/2016 7:51:00 AM
Thanks!
Date: 7/22/2016 1:58:00 PM
Sushma, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**
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Sushma A. Singh
Date: 7/22/2016 10:12:00 PM
Thanks for the warm welcome. I am a practising orthodontist and manage to write poems whenever I can squeeze time out from my schedule. Best Wishes Sushma

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