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A Toast

Of simple rolls to playfully wisp
to a beauty of a lovers kiss
to forgetting the day, as children at play
to knowing where to be, but still to stay
to simple words with complex meanings
to living life's fantasy, so near to dreaming
to being disorganized, and out of sorts
to keeping things beautiful, and short of course
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Petersen Potter Avatar
December 8, 2014 at 10:45 PM
Forgot the 7 for you Ian! :)
Johnston Avatar
December 8, 2014 at 9:54 PM
Cannot fault this poem, I like the couplet form used too. Keep writing on Carol
Petersen Potter Avatar
December 8, 2014 at 9:21 PM
Very nice rhymes verses, Ian, dear friend! Truly enjoyed it! A 7 for you! Have a lovely day! :) Love and hugs! .xxx D.
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