A Titanic Farewell

Five years of heartache, stale goodbyes
While families part, with tear-filled eyes
Recession rules, as work dries up
They leave to fill their working cup
 
As the second hand counts down the minute
Both love and loss appear infinite
Each day, each week, all times of year
We watch, as loved ones disappear
 
Naive of life, with bag in hand
Seeking dollar, pound, or krugerand
That's all she wrote, that's all that's in it
Another leaves, every sixth minute
 
For many, a room with a couch for a bed
A place to rest a weary head
Lifes lessons etched upon their face
Our countrys heritage, a sick disgrace

No flight of earls, just common folk
The golden egg has lost its yoke
Titanic shame, a guiltless owner
No cure awaits from a bloodless donor
 
Seventy seven and seventeen score
Left our fair isle, for a distant shore
In search of a living, destined to roam
Abandoned dreams of a life at home
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Breidenthal Avatar
September 8, 2014 at 4:36 AM
This is another sad, but touching piece. I admire your rhymes very much... they flow so nicely and precisely. I cannot imagine the sadness..very nice write--keep up the amazing work. Always, Laura
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May 19, 2014 at 4:47 PM
hello Peter, this sounds like someone I know... A very deep poem, it is a hard life to live... Enjoyed stopping by:) Love ~SKAT~
Andresen Avatar
May 17, 2014 at 11:58 AM
- A heartbreaking poem - dreams that are crushed .... really a well written poem, Peter !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
May 17, 2014 at 7:02 AM
This is such a sad write on what is happening in our country Peter. Here on the Isle of Man unemployment is relatively low with many migrant workers seeking a new start with the jobs that are available but being separated from their families at an enormous cost. Hugs Jan xxx
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