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A Titanic Farewell

Five years of heartache, stale goodbyes While families part, with tear-filled eyes Recession rules, as work dries up They leave to fill their working cup As the second hand counts down the minute Both love and loss appear infinite Each day, each week, all times of year We watch, as loved ones disappear Naive of life, with bag in hand Seeking dollar, pound, or krugerand That's all she wrote, that's all that's in it Another leaves, every sixth minute For many, a room with a couch for a bed A place to rest a weary head Lifes lessons etched upon their face Our countrys heritage, a sick disgrace No flight of earls, just common folk The golden egg has lost its yoke Titanic shame, a guiltless owner No cure awaits from a bloodless donor Seventy seven and seventeen score Left our fair isle, for a distant shore In search of a living, destined to roam Abandoned dreams of a life at home

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 9/8/2014 4:36:00 AM
This is another sad, but touching piece. I admire your rhymes very much... they flow so nicely and precisely. I cannot imagine the sadness..very nice write--keep up the amazing work. Always, Laura
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Date: 5/19/2014 4:47:00 PM
hello Peter, this sounds like someone I know... A very deep poem, it is a hard life to live... Enjoyed stopping by:) Love ~SKAT~
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Date: 5/17/2014 11:58:00 AM
- A heartbreaking poem - dreams that are crushed .... really a well written poem, Peter !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/17/2014 7:02:00 AM
This is such a sad write on what is happening in our country Peter. Here on the Isle of Man unemployment is relatively low with many migrant workers seeking a new start with the jobs that are available but being separated from their families at an enormous cost. Hugs Jan xxx
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