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A Tired Beast

Like a hungry vampire, pursues me loneliness 
Scarier than sharp canines for me human phoniness
I feel myself a tired beast in the jungle
Which life has driven into a blind angle
But   is calling ahead brutal struggle
Who knows  - if  will find me buddle?

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Eve Roper Date: 2/27/2018 12:23:00 PM your emotions and imagery are very powerful in your magnificent writes ,, Hai Hon Login to Reply Hai Hon Date: 2/27/2018 1:09:00 PM Thank you! Unfortunately, this is a record of cruel life realities.

Emma Green Date: 2/14/2018 5:58:00 AM The idea behind your poem is so distinct at the start but, the struggle to find who you want seems to stop you in your tracks. And that, of course, holds you back, exhausted. Tis a case of keep on trying both in writing and searching. Perhaps? Login to Reply Hai Hon Date: 2/14/2018 6:11:00 AM The struggle for a place under the sun and the satisfaction of conscience can be very grueling, but this is the necessary path without an alternative.I described the moment of desperation, which is natural, but does not inhibit the movement forward.It's like a samurai's despair before a battle, who does not know if he will perish, but the battle is his duty.