Brandy Nicole Poet Rhyme

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 in the pause
     — beauty is still,
           and as moments gently move
               embracing the rush . . . 
  
        the air  holds a soft   h u s h.


  
    in gentle breaths   
words  wait  to  whisper— 
           a timeless melody we know . . .
                         the closeness of
                                       forever love.

         lingering in the calm
                     creates a longing for 
                             a tender touch,
                
             and— a delicate 

                             echo
    ____________________________


~ safe in the space and feeling you close ~

a timeless melody

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in the pause
     — beauty is still,
           and as moments gently move
               embracing the rush . . . 
  
        the air  holds a soft   h u s h.


  
    in gentle breaths   
words  wait  to  whisper— 
           a timeless melody we know . . .
                         the closeness of
                                       forever love.

         lingering in the calm
                     creates a longing for 
                             a tender touch,
                
             and— a delicate 

                             echo
          ____________________________


~ safe in the space and feeling you close ~

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Alison A Smith September 18, 2026 at 8:31 PM A beautifully shaped concrete lyric: its widening pauses, airy spacing, and gradual drift into “echo” let the visual form embody the poem’s stillness. The soft musical language and intimate closing create a tender sense of love suspended beyond time.

Nine Dragons September 18, 2026 at 7:17 PM Warm and reflective. It delivers you to those tender moments from days bygone. It helps me appreciate the quiet where only our hearts spoke.