A Time When You Could Eat the Sun

The trees are made of feathers and sticks
The sun is made of golden cheese
The moon was made of whipped cream
A place where the water was made out of blue Kool- Aid
The grass was made of gummy green strings
There was no houses and no place to hide
A place where a boy ate the sun
A place where the Moon swalloed up the world
A tragedy that melted and turned to liquid
No one could swim in the sea
No one could tan underneath the branches
A world where time stood still and the hours were long
A place where humans never existed

"Please Try to Go Beyond Earth Hour"
Treat earth like something you imagined when you were a kid a place where these things happened and you could be safe. Pick up your trash and clean up your yard! after all this is your world too :)!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Kendrick Avatar
May 11, 2012 at 3:11 PM
Enjoyed reading your creative work..Congrats on your win..Sara
Prabhu Avatar
May 11, 2012 at 9:27 AM
congrats on the contest placement.. WHAT AGR8 WAY TO APPROACH THE THEME!!!!!!!!
Prabhu Avatar
May 11, 2012 at 9:26 AM
congrats on the contest placement
Brown Avatar
May 11, 2012 at 6:57 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Nikko's "Beyond Earth" contest Shayla. Love, Carol
Dendinger Avatar
May 11, 2012 at 7:05 AM
thank you
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
May 11, 2012 at 5:40 AM
Congratulations on your Earth Hour win Shayla xx
Dendinger Avatar
May 11, 2012 at 7:05 AM
thank you
Williams Avatar
May 11, 2012 at 3:28 AM
Shayla congrats on your win..David
Dendinger Avatar
May 11, 2012 at 7:05 AM
thank you :D
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