A Time For Us

Through silk tresses glistening in ember, I saw you for the first time in December. Oh sparks could ignite in freezing snow, a rhythm born in silent hearts I'd know. Your cherry-dipped voice dwelling upon my painted canvas on a scarlet dawn. Ethereal touch that drenches my longing soul, inhaling your musk diffusing us into a whole. Darling, I'd waited for you all these years, your tickling glances dissolved my fears. You breathe silver crescents on newborn pearls, lulling me in blankets of tranquil starry curls. I've kissed your silhouette in strumming breeze, yet my harp strings love for your heart to please. My safe heaven in a moist galaxy of sand dunes, a time for us, our heartbeats fuse to distant tunes. You've brushed my halo with siphoned showers and I believe love was destined to be ours. In this world and an afterlife I do believe, we'll find each other for December to retrieve. Tonight I melt in your arms to weave a song, I've waited for my love, hasn't it been long? August 17, 2020 A Time For Us Poetry Contest Sponsor: JCB Burl

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Date: 9/4/2020 5:28:00 AM
Congratulations, Aditi, on your top win. I love the rich and magnificent images in your poems. The couplets are amazing! Love, Mala
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Date: 8/27/2020 4:07:00 PM
congratulations my poetic friend, your poetry is truly a joy to read and immerse myself in
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Date: 8/27/2020 9:40:00 AM
Congratulations, dear friend for a beautiful 1st place win. Many blessings ~ John
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Date: 8/27/2020 9:23:00 AM
Congrats on your top win! Such splashes of colour!! Keep it up! Krish
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Date: 8/27/2020 8:17:00 AM
Hello, - huge deserved Congratulations, Aditi. Poet of imagery, you're the crown wearer. Everything John's comment says, I second.
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Date: 8/27/2020 3:56:00 AM
Congrats and God bless you with many more beautiful inspirations like this one.
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Date: 8/27/2020 2:04:00 AM
Congratulations dear Aditi for your 1st place win. This couplet speaks a lot!
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Date: 8/20/2020 12:22:00 PM
- A wonderful poem ... so many beautiful couplet with playful rhyme :) - Another beautiful winning poem, Aditi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/17/2020 1:54:00 PM
Aditi, your love-inspired muse washes over me with a sweet smelling fragrance of adoration and longing for your love. Your couplets form perfect pearls of poetry; fortunate is the man who receives such a timeless gift remembering that first December glance. Pure delight from your gifted pen, my friend ~ John
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