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A Time For Grief

Since that fatal day began we were forced inside and when churches closed all Gods people cried yes we forgot how to pray, with voice and platitude we opted for the lazy ways of lethargic lassitude Time isn't promised as we wait on bended knee and even though we know that Faith in God is key, we choose to bathe our faces with tears of disbelief for we have lost loved ones and are filled, with grief. Contest Name: Let The Pens Flow Sponsor: Jenish Somadas June 14, 2020

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Date: 7/7/2020 5:06:00 AM
Your words shine through your faith in darkness. Congratulations on your win. Keep writing and inspiring :)
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Date: 7/3/2020 1:10:00 AM
Beautiful expression of the sadness many of us are feeling. Thank you, Mystic Rose, for putting these feelings into words. Congratulations on your #1 win in the contest, my friend ~ John
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Date: 7/2/2020 11:05:00 PM
You composed it beautifully mixed wit present day grieves..Great win Pixie..Congrats..
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Date: 7/2/2020 1:41:00 PM
Pixie Dust, you have conveyed a powerful, timely message in this WINNING poem! Janice
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Date: 7/2/2020 12:55:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Beautiful and true. Love your line, "and when churches closed all Gods people cried." Guess some are now reading their bible. Enjoy your win and day..............
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Date: 6/15/2020 9:59:00 PM
An insightful, poignant write, Vie. we can get lost in our own sorrow and forget from where our help comes from. This one speaks to me tonight, for sure. Thanks for sharing:) Blessings, Rhonda xx
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Date: 6/14/2020 7:40:00 AM
Poignant write, Vienna--apt for the world today--a better day will soon come.
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