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A Tigers Revenge

Swim to clear his mind Land nor water will stop him Intruders beware FOR PRIMAL INSTINCT CONTEST

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Date: 6/14/2010 9:43:00 PM
I remember this one too. NICe job,Faleshia!
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Date: 5/7/2010 8:13:00 PM
Keep writing those anything, you'll get better and better results, Faleshia...:) hugs, Jimmy
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Date: 5/1/2010 2:13:00 AM
Can see the tiger swimming for his prey! Nicely written Haiku, Faleshia! Good luck in the contest and thank you for your kind comments...Costs of living are also higher in the western part of Germany and that was also one of the reasons to move to the eastern part....Keep your pen flowing!...Gert
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Date: 4/30/2010 7:29:00 PM
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Date: 4/30/2010 2:59:00 PM
Good one, Faleshia!
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Date: 4/30/2010 1:17:00 PM
Grrrreat interpertation of the photo...Keep the creative pen flowing..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
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Date: 4/30/2010 1:00:00 PM
i love it! good write and good luck in the contest! - edward
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Date: 4/30/2010 12:37:00 PM
The title works well with the last line. So much truth shared here. Best wishes in the contest. Karen
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Date: 4/30/2010 11:02:00 AM
That was a great picture and this is a great poem to go with it! I love the way you captured the cats power with the second line. It makes him seem noble to me. Great write.
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Date: 4/30/2010 10:00:00 AM
Wishing you the best in Raul's Primal Instinct contest Faleshia. Love,Carol
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Date: 4/30/2010 8:53:00 AM
HI, Faleshia. I saw your comment to me as I was preparing to leave my comments. Maybe you SHOULD go back to NY.GEEEEZ. I see you did the haiku too. That middle line is sure true!! Glad to know you are a fellow Virgo! Luv, andrea
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