A Tigers Revenge

Swim to clear his mind
Land nor water will stop him
Intruders beware


FOR PRIMAL INSTINCT CONTEST
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
June 14, 2010 at 9:43 PM
I remember this one too. NICe job,Faleshia!
Anderson Avatar
May 7, 2010 at 8:13 PM
Keep writing those Haikus...like anything, you'll get better and better results, Faleshia...:) hugs, Jimmy
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May 1, 2010 at 2:13 AM
Can see the tiger swimming for his prey! Nicely written Haiku, Faleshia! Good luck in the contest and thank you for your kind comments...Costs of living are also higher in the western part of Germany and that was also one of the reasons to move to the eastern part....Keep your pen flowing!...Gert
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April 30, 2010 at 7:29 PM
GOOD LUCK , YOU WILL DO GREAT, ENJOYED,,IRMA
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April 30, 2010 at 2:59 PM
Good one, Faleshia!
Kendrick Avatar
April 30, 2010 at 1:17 PM
Grrrreat interpertation of the photo...Keep the creative pen flowing..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
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April 30, 2010 at 1:00 PM
i love it! good write and good luck in the contest! - edward
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April 30, 2010 at 12:37 PM
The title works well with the last line. So much truth shared here. Best wishes in the contest. Karen
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April 30, 2010 at 11:02 AM
That was a great picture and this is a great poem to go with it! I love the way you captured the cats power with the second line. It makes him seem noble to me. Great write.
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April 30, 2010 at 10:00 AM
Wishing you the best in Raul's Primal Instinct contest Faleshia. Love,Carol
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April 30, 2010 at 8:53 AM
HI, Faleshia. I saw your comment to me as I was preparing to leave my comments. Maybe you SHOULD go back to NY.GEEEEZ. I see you did the haiku too. That middle line is sure true!! Glad to know you are a fellow Virgo! Luv, andrea
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