A Thousand "us"

For Claire x



Do I love you?
Those who have loved, will know
Do I adore you?
Incredibly so
Are we soul mates?
Yes.  I recognise
A thousand “us” within your eyes

Am I beside you?
Every step and breath, you take
Am I forever?
The promise, we made
Will love last eternal?
It already has. I recognise
A thousand “us” within your eyes
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Agustin Avatar
June 30, 2025 at 3:09 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
A  Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 11:37 PM
VIKKI, A great pleasure to find and read the inspiration poured from your pen today. Love ** SKAT **
Gumbo Avatar
May 9, 2009 at 2:50 PM
Very touching! Just beautiful Vikki! Great write. :)
Devonshire Avatar
February 26, 2009 at 3:11 PM
Hi Vikki, this is a fine tribute to true love. I'm happy for you; to find such love is quite remarkable. Good work! Carolyn
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February 22, 2009 at 1:26 AM
really sweet, Vikki! loved this thoughtful write.. ~ Arany
Parish Avatar
February 14, 2009 at 11:30 PM
Good write Vikki. I like the questions and answers writing.
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February 14, 2009 at 6:57 PM
This poem is wonderful Vikki! I love the flow of words and the expression of love and unity. Blessings and thanks for visiting. :) Izzy
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